Well we got there in the end didn't we :D really briliant story, you know how much I enjoyed it :) I like this ending; of course there can't be clear skies from here on out, where's the fun in that? I thoroughly look forward to your next piece- don't leave us hanging forever ;)
-vampirebee

Wow... Yes, we waited for forever, but it was worth it! And I'm looking forward to that sequel!

HAHA I STEAL YER HUNDREDTH REVIEW.

The plot is pretty good, but it's really fast and the chapters are kinda short. I read this entire thing in less then an hour. BUT YOU BROUGHT BACK DAVY JONES! YESS!

And then killed him. Wah.

This COULD be how the next movie comes out, but you made some of the characters... well, out of character. Jack doesn't thank people. Davy Jones isn't as cruel as he should be in the story. The fight scenes aren't very well described, but this is a pretty good story overall.

This is really good. Great job. Not a will/elizabeth fan but still a great story

Aww, that was such a sweet ending!! I liked the way you killed off Jones, that was good. Congratulations of finishing your story!! :D

Aww wat a great ending, a bit unrealistic that elizabeth cud even stand after twins but hey its only a story! well done i really loved it, a happy ever after for all (maybe its time to give maria and jack a little more spotlight ;) )

Great chapter! THANK YOU FOR UPDATING!

AWSOME chapy ehehhehehehehehhe!

YAYS! BEST CHAPTER YET! Can't wait to figure out if the next baby is a boy or girl. Thank you so much. I'm very sorry about your grandfather. I'll keep him and you in my prayers. Thank you.

Wow, for elizabeth that really is bad timing! I like it.

hey cool to see another chapter! it was gud and the plot was very gud however i found it a bit choppy and parts were completely implausible for e.g when jack whispered in little will's ear he just nodded as though he had been waiting for it i.e he didnt even squek in surprise. As for the birth no way wud Elizabeth be in any condition to A. swing a sword while in labour B.drag herself away while still giving birth and C. get up and help will to continue fighting right after birth. Again its just a few minor disconnections other than that the idea of twins is excellent as now it gives them a complete little family and the plan was very gud...love the story cant wait for the next piece :D

I love it and I can't wait to read the next chapter

I was GOING to review chapter 26, but told me I already had. Well, I'm going to put my review in chapter 25, and say: I love this story! Update soon, and I hope you get 100 reviews!

i like this story so much.
you have kept me intressed for a while.

it is so awesome!

This is really good. Great job.