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xMischiefManaged013
2007-06-12 . chapter 1
Mere words can not express how wonderful this story is, but i'll try my hardest.

Absolutely brilliant! You wrote down all my thoughts and feelings toward this snag in their relationship and have made me see the good in it.

A fine piece of perfection, and i hope you keep up with the great fics.

-Sara
a muggle named Caity
2007-06-03 . chapter 1
That truly was a bittersweet ending, wasn't it? I liked it, then I didn't like it. I don't know. A few people have claimed that the writers said, in a deleted scene, that if the captain's lover was faithful to him for those ten years that, when the ten years was up, then the captain could stay on land for the rest of his life. I'm not sure if that's true or not (we'll have to wait for the dvd to come out), but Ihope it is!

Anyway, fantastic job on your oneshot. I truly enjoyed it, and thought it was rather cute.
:D
Rory4
2007-06-02 . chapter 1
I have to say, in this fic you managed to make me feel the same feelings I did while watching Will and Elizabeth's story play out in the movie. You made me get teary but you also made me laugh. I loved the whole not-so-politically-correct king and queen part, and I loved the ending, as well. This fic was the epitome of the bitter with the sweet, just like this last movie was. Brava.

-Rory4
megan
2007-06-02 . chapter 1
Your writing is very good! I would've loved more though. Nice job with the plot, it flows perfectly with the ending of the movie! It was sad and hopeful at the same time

Again - I'm dying for more. It was absolutely beautiful!
chebelle
2007-06-02 . chapter 1
Write more write more:D I loved it, so sweet and so damn sad! Very well written, not too fluffy, and it's good that "bittersweet" feeling was still there! My heart is truely breaking for them...
xox
Jedi Princess Jainakin
2007-06-02 . chapter 1
This really was a good story. So sweet and sad at the same time. You did a great job portraying how that one day might go. Good job!
Goldfeather
2007-06-02 . chapter 1
I love your story! It's so sweet... and very well written.
Peppy87
2007-06-02 . chapter 1
I really enjoyed it!!
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