brilliant! loved the twist at the end - wonderful!

Very powerful, especially the last line. Bravo.

Whoops.

So typical of the Doctor to lose track of time, isn't it? But Four months and one day? That's bad even for him. And this just proves how dire the consequences can be.

Poor Martha. Nice little piece! Very angsty! ^^
Keep on writing!

Blessed Be!
Hugs,
Peanut x

This was really good. The thought that the Doctor's timeing was off. That's standard Doctor though. He's always late, or botches something up. Poor Martha though, it freaks her out.