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| Kawaii Kabu 2008-07-28 ch 1, | abuseParts of this made me cry. Some made me cry. Some made me Goddamned emo. I have never read such a great Beastboy centric story that made me go on such a rollercoaster of emotions. It seems like the first Teen Titan story I've read in ages. Seeing as most of the Teen Titan author's/ess' are slipping. And this gave me a sense of reassurance that all hope is not lost. :D and for once, i read a angsty depressing story without saying "This is too damn emo!" all the way through. Congradulations on your piece, it was truly captivating. |
| darkgraywolf 2008-07-17 ch 1, | abuseDANG...wow just wow that was a powerful story and very emotional wow. |
| areya 2008-07-05 ch 1, anon. | abuseyou have a way with words, that was amazing. im a sap, and i love bb (i was blinking away tears) |
| Twilight Phantom Dragon 2008-06-10 ch 1, | abuseWonderful! Tears were pricking my eyes as I red this. I felt so bad for Beast Boy until the end. It was absolutely greatness! Perfect is the best word to describe the fic. |
| Coco-Minu 2008-04-19 ch 1, | abuseThis is simply wonderful. I really love the idea of it, and the overall calibre is excellent. Nice work. :) |
| Peace Like a River 2008-02-18 ch 1, | abuseYup. 'Perfection' is exactly how I would describe this fic. :-) |
| Harry Potter Fan 1994 2008-02-04 ch 1, | abuseOh wow...that was amazing... |
| Not G. Ivingname 2008-01-06 ch 1, anon. | abusewell wrighten, loved it, why I like beast boy put through pain even I don't know |
| Ardent Ly 2007-10-08 ch 1, | abuseI cried as I read this the first time. I was bawling during the second time. I havent cried this hard since I've found out that Santa wasn't real. Thank you. This story touched my heart in so many ways and is just so utterly amazing. All the best in up-coming stories! `M.H. |
| Raven's Secret 2007-07-30 ch 1, | abuseomg...i actually cried. it takes a lot to make me cry, but you did it. congratulations. :) that was an amazing story. really brilliant. i didn't think such a thing could be written, and definitely not as a oneshot. that was stunning. and that last line was perfect. simply perfect. i kept thinking you would end it like that, but you never know. anyway, magnificent job. |
| Josh 2007-07-09 ch 1, anon. | abuse-Jeez, and what kind of disease did you have when you wrote this? I noticed the slight change in writing styles; but other than the beforementioned eyes for ice mistake, I didn't really see much in grammatical errors. All in all, I thought the story was great; it was a very interesting dive into the darkness that is depression. |
| Kevorkian 2007-07-04 ch 1, | abuseWow. That was...really depressing. And here I was, thinking you were kidding in the beginning author's note. Never again. The story overall is great, and the plot moves at a comfortable pace, despite the length of the work. The one thing that didn't make as much sense to me was the mentioning of his age. (The "He was fifteen. He was sixteen. He was seventeen. He was twenty.") Other than establishing that time has passed, I don't really understand it's purpose. Maybe I'm just thick, but what, if there is one, is the deeper significance behind the ages? Anyway, I found this story by looking under a friend's favorite stories list. It's certainly going under my favs list, as well. -K |
| Kettie 2007-06-29 ch 1, | abuseAw! This story was really touching! It made me cry ): I didn't think it was that bad at all, it was nice for a change :) |
| sTaRfIrExrObIn 2007-06-25 ch 1, | abuseWow. This is really good. I don't usually get out of reading anything other than starfire and robin stuff. Much less Beastboy stuff. I really liked it though. |
| FireDitto 2007-06-25 ch 1, | abuseUgh, didn't I tell you that when I re-read this I would find a multitude of editing thingies that I missed to start with? -rolls eyes- Nothing major, not spelling, just little pebbles in the sand. Or whatever. "another cube of eyes" is probably the funniest one I found -grins- How could I have missed that?! -rolls eyes- Oh well. You already know how awesome I think this little oneshot it. Still love it. Great little read. Now, I'm going to bed before it gets any earlier (2:25am o_O) and I'll send you an email at a more decent our; mum's mare finally foaled and mine went through a fence to get screwed x_X its all very exciting XD Love the look of the Garion story, too. Haven't read it yet though -shot- I'm so lazy XD Lizzie |