 Constance Greene 2007-06-10 . chapter 1Ohmygoodness. RoxasAxelNaminé is love. ♥
This was really good. And the canonness--! Heheh, makes me like it better.
"Love didn't exist. It was only but a dream, a fantasy, a wish on a star." The last phrase makes this line really unique.
"Petal pink lips" Again, brilliant description. The entire fic was teeming with it -- so lovely, so delicate, so passionate and poetic.
Very nice -- how it can be said with emotion, even though they're Nobodies. Axel, Naminé and Roxas were really the only ones who seemed like they could feel... and I guess Demyx, too. xD
.x. Constance. |