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Constance Greene
2007-06-10 . chapter 1
Ohmygoodness. RoxasAxelNaminé is love. ♥

This was really good. And the canonness--! Heheh, makes me like it better.

"Love didn't exist. It was only but a dream, a fantasy, a wish on a star." The last phrase makes this line really unique.

"Petal pink lips" Again, brilliant description. The entire fic was teeming with it -- so lovely, so delicate, so passionate and poetic.

Very nice -- how it can be said with emotion, even though they're Nobodies. Axel, Naminé and Roxas were really the only ones who seemed like they could feel... and I guess Demyx, too. xD

.x. Constance.
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