 justawritier 2009-11-05 . chapter 1awsome! too bad that's not what really happend. Love "wonderwall" too. |
 StardustSComet 2009-02-20 . chapter 1I loved it! That was so awesome! |
 A Chocolate Frog 2008-02-02 . chapter 1Ahh, if only it could have turned out like that...I was so sure he wasn't dead, and now I'm so angry...
Fantastic story, though!! Great work! |
 Revenge2112 2007-12-17 . chapter 1I really really liked this. very good. and well-written. great job ;) |
 sk8r-grl 2007-11-21 . chapter 1omg! that was so powerful! i loved it! i read it twice! the first time i was bawling!! it IS a shame that the writers won't make the 4th season like that...anyways, loved the PB&J moment when Charlie kissed her the first time he saw her! |
 jenny 2007-11-10 . chapter 1 well, liked it.it was quite long though but still it was a pretty good story. well yeah it's really really heartbreaking that the stories in fanfictions won't be included in the real show but we can dream can't we? but charlie and claire sort of kiss barely in the show so maybe you should lessen the kissing scenes. anyways that was good! great job! read a lot of your stories too you know. they were all awesome so keep up the good work!:D |
 xCharlie-Groupiex 2007-08-19 . chapter 1I cried so hard at that. Part of sadness, and part of happiness! Thank you so much for the happy ending. We need some every now and then. I really wish that could actually happen. But I'm still in denial. Charlie will come back somehow. I hope. That's why when I write fics I am going to pretend the whole dying thing never happened. Great job! |
 Isabella Carter 2007-07-20 . chapter 1Favourite character, favourite show, favourite song... THANK YOU SO MUCH! ^_^ Your ending is SO much better than the Season 3 finale. They (the creators) should hire you as a... umm... whatever the name is for someone who writes scripts. Anyway, great job! :) |
 kissbangx3 2007-07-08 . chapter 1I'M GOING TO CRY!! I never got to finish it, so I remembered today and read the rest. I had no idea how long/sweet/sad/happy it was!! It was the perfect blend of Charlie's heroism, the situation's tragedy, and Sawyer/Hurley/etc comic.
You're right, I think fanfictions are better than the actual show. If this was what actually happened, that'd be awesome. Then again, then the show would be over. But without Charlie the show IS over!!
Okay I'm going to stop this long review. I'm so glad you ended it with the lyrics. I don't always know or like songfic lyrics, but of course I did in this case... (thanks to you, haha). Awesome job! Now I've got to go cry some, ta. |
 Missing Whisper 2007-06-27 . chapter 1:(:( That's how it shoulda been :( COME BACK CHARLIE! |
 Alix Zin 2007-06-26 . chapter 1I absolutly loved this version of the finale. Also this made me so happy because I'm a huge Oasis fan and think that many of the songs relate to Charlie's sotry. I'm glad that someone else made the connection, especilly after Charlie actually sang Wonderwall on the show. |
 ladyduck4563 2007-06-05 . chapter 1Happy ending was great. I loved it! Great job. I enjoy fanfiction more than the show also. *sigh* Great action in the Looking Glass!! |
 extraordinarygirl 2007-06-05 . chapter 1Oh my god, I love this story. Especially with the whole concept built around Wonderwall, which has been one of my favourite songs since I can remember. It's my rock, it keeps me going.
I really wish that the show would've turned out like this.
I hope you decide to add on more in the future. |
 Spice of Life 2007-06-04 . chapter 1I've just broken out into loud sobs. Why couldn't it have really happened like that? Oh well, I'm SO done with that show now! |
 CandCPace 2007-06-03 . chapter 1I really really wish that this happened in the show!! I'm so upset that he's gone :cry
Anyway great story I really enjoyed it. |