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Reviews for: Toes Trilogy II: Dove's Dark Discovery
Arcaten
2009-08-30 . chapter 11
Dude! Raven didn't catch all of Dove's words (“No, it’s my fault - It’s exactly what HE said would happen – ...")

Can't wait for the next one!
Arcaten
2009-05-07 . chapter 9
One of the greatest unknown wonders of fanfiction, you have dished out yet another amazing chapter!

You have Dove contemplating with some next-level thoughts, i really wanna see what hapens when shes discovered or if the guilt eats away until shes forced to talk to someone about it...

I kinda want to see a little more Raven in there, but other than that, keep doin what you're doin!
Arcaten
2007-07-11 . chapter 5
Well this story has certainly evolved. Dove doesn't seem to trust Raven's jugement as much anymore. I really don't know where you're taking this story, but the title forbodes interesting chapters to come. Keep up the great work and update when possible.
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