I love this story already. I like your style writing style ,the characters are canon, and the end of the chapter was...promising heehee.

-opens mouth to say something-

Iggy: -cuts her off- Pre-book 4..

Me: Right. Sorry, it's just, after book 4 it's slightly annoyed me people still saying Jeb is Max's voice...

Iggy: Other than that?

Me: GREAT!!

~Skits&IG! (No, we have nothing witty to say...)

Dun. Dun. Dun.

Iggy: Her chip screws up computers and comes with a nifty voice that is installed instantly into her head!

Me: Side-effects include dizziness, vomiting, killer headaches that make you want to die, fainting and possible death!

Iggy: All this could be yours for the 19--

Me: easy payments of $99.99!!

Both: -bows-

Me: And that's out informercial for the day.

Iggy: -continues coloring-

Me: Hey! That's my coloring book!!

Iggy: Oh, just do the review.

Me: -pouts- Fine. It was great!I loved it. I also love the song Here We Go Again, but that's a different story. Anyway, ah-mazing. I'm totally interested now. Actually, I was from the beginning, but still.

~Skits&IG!

DARNIT MAX! Why must you be so stubborn?! Fang is /in love/ with you, chica! -groans- /JUST/ like Katniss...

Iggy: Think JP knows Suzanne?

Me: Quite possibly.

Max and Katniss would probably kill each other...

Iggy: And back to why we're reviewing...?

Me: Right. Awesome so far! /Loved/ what you did there to put them in an awkward situation. :) In the words of Tony the Tiger, "It's great!!"

~Skits&IG!

Hmm, me likey so far, though the Max&Fang sharing a hotel room is a bit overdone. -shrugs- But it's great. Although, usually, it's a room with only one bed. I'm sure it'll be great. On to chapter numero dose!

Iggy: I thought taht was three?

Me: -facepalm- Ruin the moment there Igs...

~Skits&IG!

like it:)

*stares at screen with jaw on floor*

Why the cliffe? WHY!?

so far good

COME ON! max and fang have to share a room-that is the stupidest, most overused thing ever! other than that (sorry about the rampage, I'm not in a great mood...)the story is FANTASTIC so far.

WOW!

I really love it!

I have to say, you're a confident writer. And a good one. Well, MAN, you're really into cliffies, aren't you?
Part 3 better not end like this one...-gets out pitchforks-
Ahaha. Just kidding.
I'll be reviewing your other story. -winks-
-sigh- And i STILL don't know who the second voice is. I don't think it's tortoise lady anymore. Hm...who could it be? unless it's an OC.
oh, btw, I'm Sabrina.

what?
WHAT?
WHAT?!
Max getting suicidal...¬¬

now what exactly is that tortoise getting at? hm...
i change my mind, i'm guessing she's the second voice.

oh gosh, i really agree about the fourth book being disappointing. I think JP would have done better to leave it at the third book than to continue with his fourth book. Although there is more Faxness in the fourth book. xD