This is interesting.
I can't see where you are going with this, but I'd like to read more.

Please update soon.

:D A wonderful chapter, very well written I look forward to reading more

Great to see you writing some more, and will be looking forward to the mstery of what happened with Xian, Ranma, and how things will change from this time on.

Odd, but it shows some promise.

Well done. I've always enjoyed your writing, and this certainly keeps at least to the same standard you have priorly employed.

Please, continue.

-- Pat

Wow!

I don't review much, mostly because I'm incredibly lazy, but this story is very, very intersting and I definitely want you to continue it. Just these two brief chapters really brought me in and left me wanting more. More backstory, more history, more knowledge about what's going on.

There were a couple of spelling errors, but comparatively few. It's always impossible to catch them all, so it's no big deal. Anyway, I hope you will continue this story and am looking forward to reading it when you do.

Nice work!

Weird story... but very intiguing. I'll definitely read the next chapter.

Well starting a
new' saga i see. I think you might have Read Sarge 4's stories as well.

Still I'm curious as to whom the Dragon lady is, who killed Shampoo, and we hear nothing of Kasumi Ryouga, Ukyo, and the others!

I have a sneaky feeling the Dragon lady is someone Nabiki knows but has changed from her teen years. Oh and yes where IS Nodoka?

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