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| nasimrochester 2008-07-02 ch 1, | abuseInteresting. I haven't really seen Braveheart but Sherrie explained it to me. I am waiting with impatience |
| sherrie 2008-06-30 ch 1, anon. | abusethat's what i call a good start. i can't wait for the next chapter!! |
| Princess Persephone 2008-01-20 ch 1, | abuseInteresting premise. Hope you haven't abandoned it! I've always loved Braveheart, and the romantic in me can totally see this happen somewhere along the line in the time frame. Really unique! Update soon! |
| Lioness1 2007-08-18 ch 1, | abuseWhen i read your summary I was so happy! Finally, a story that seemed unique and historical. I say unique because for the first time, even in a short chapter, I see two characters that seem...real. And not modern. In under a thousand words you have kept me interested and yearning for more. I do not review often, and while my own stories are silly girlish fantasies, I honestly see talent here. Please continue soon! |
| jenny 2007-07-15 ch 1, anon. | abusei love the story. Please write more. i wanna see how things go with lorna and Vincent... ^^ keep up the great work |
| open mind 2007-07-10 ch 1, anon. | abusethis is great, please right more, its really good |
| TavyBeckettFan 2007-06-06 ch 1, | abuseOOh! Intense! Maybe he'll give her her own room in his place, and leave her alone. Then he 'cheated' prima noctes! At least thats what ill hope he will do...right? Update! jb |
| Scottishgal12 2007-06-03 ch 1, | abuseGood first chapter, well written. Cant wait to read more! |