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TheDancingKiller
2009-11-12 . chapter 15
brilliant! I look forward to more this is lovely done story
AddictedtoTwilightForever
2009-11-06 . chapter 15
Update soon!
,00,
2009-10-23 . chapter 15
Please update.
excessivelyperky
2009-10-22 . chapter 15
“I do. But I refuse to believe any of the castle’s residents would help Black in.”

--Yes, yes, I never quite understood why Remus did so _before_ he knew Sirius Black was innocent.

Nice duel, cute bit with the rat, and about time Augusta Longbottom remembered what she said to her grandson in a fit of fury at him possibly being a Squib.
snapeangel
2009-10-21 . chapter 15
great so far

I say after this fiasco of a turny harry needs to be kept WELL way from hogwarts...too much ** happens to him and his friends / relatives there..nuts
snapeangel
2009-10-21 . chapter 12
u haven't mentioned it and I hadn't remembered to ask..does harry have that horrible scar or not?
just curious
snapeangel
2009-10-21 . chapter 10
OH YOU TELL HIM SEV! I love the dressing down lockheart got! HA

I also like the resolution with the poor bastlisk (sp? sorry)
snapeangel
2009-10-21 . chapter 9
poor harry, I think hogwarts is cursed for him
snapeangel
2009-10-21 . chapter 7
oh i think one great phrase for the letter to AD would be "** off you medetling old fool!" but that would be childish :D
snapeangel
2009-10-21 . chapter 5
i glad that DD and NL were softed into helga's house, I always thought NL would do better there than goric's
and HG in ravenclaw makes MUCH more sense than griff

hell they should be able to get AD some if not completly due to using legilimency on a child -- much less without permission..very bad

hope he goes DOWN :D

love the story I wasn't sure if i would from the summary but I'm glad I desided to read it today!
snapeangel
2009-10-21 . chapter 3
rather sytherin to make sure the potter seat on the board of governors is filled by someone worthwile
smart to have harry to to rome for school to keep him away from AD
very cool that DD is a wizard as well, I always figured petunia and DD in cannon had to be squids..or lily adopted..how else could such a powerful witch come from thier family?
snapeangel
2009-10-21 . chapter 2
i very muchlike this chapter, the way sev handled the things with the dudley's is a million times better than how stupid AD did in cannon
snapeangel
2009-10-21 . chapter 1
great first chapter

what an idiot the headmaster is..always thought he was ** towards severus, especially as a young man
SlyPuff RavenDor
2009-10-13 . chapter 15
This story is awesome! Please update soon!! :)
ravenaurelius
2009-10-03 . chapter 15
fantastic story
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