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Anake14
2009-10-18 . chapter 19
At least you tell us what's going on...unlike SOME writers... ah well, great story, keep it up.
angelvan105
2009-08-13 . chapter 19
it all alright i know how hard to make idea to make story even no matter how much you think or try!! finding it the idea is getting harder to harder to put perfect idea for your story! but even you can't find idea i know you will keep on trying it!! it take long time when the idea come to you!! and don't worry i bet most of your wonderful loyal Fans of your will understand on the pressure your in right now!! will i hope you have great summer your story was very wonderfully best!! i will look forward of your other story as well!! have nice rest!! good luck!
HinamoriNaruko6coolandspicy9
2009-08-12 . chapter 19
you should continue this story please make more chapters soon
Obsessive Child
2009-08-07 . chapter 19
I understand your sentiments completely, but I hope that you at least finish the Chuun Exams, nonetheless. My suggestion is to leave Naruto for a year, then come back to it. It worked with me and my Harry Potter fanfic. :)
A note on your story: why can't the Yondaime talk to Narue in Konoha? I noticed that the only times he spoke to her was during the mission on the outside.
sasunarusan
2009-06-07 . chapter 7
HI
Kit the Fiendish Fire Cat
2009-04-05 . chapter 18
I really like this story of yours so far. Its really entertaining!
I love the spin you put on the original plot..

Too bad the anime cant be more like your story..

Well Im gonna stalk- I mean subscribe to you!
I look forward to reading more should you continue!!

Signed,
Kit the (not so) fiendish fire cat
Bloody Midnight
2009-03-22 . chapter 18
I like your story!! Update soon!
deitarion/SSokolow
2009-03-07 . chapter 18
Probably the second best female Naruto fic I've ever read. (The undisputed best is "Shadow and Flame")

Given how rare good female Naruto fics are, I hope you find time to write more soon.

I especially liked how you had Yugito end up taking Haku in. I've never seen anything like that before and it made it especially amusing when Haku said “I’m not permitted to disclose that information, I’m sorry,”

Of course, I don't think I've ever seen Naruto, male or female, ever get the Hiraishin that early either. :)
Blue-Huntress
2009-03-04 . chapter 1
Why wont u update?! TT.TT
Blue-Huntress
2009-02-19 . chapter 18
Awesome! moor plez! ^.^
van
2009-02-18 . chapter 7
wow super awesome story keep it up!!
DarksMasterRen
2009-02-17 . chapter 18
Ohh! I enjoy this story alot! Its funny and twists in different ways all the time and I do hope you update soon!

Oh and you made a small error in the "bell test" chapter when Kakashi goes "To see what happens next. Duh." or somthing like that insted of saying "He said" it says "She Said" making it look like Narue said it ..
ineedbettername
2009-02-05 . chapter 1
Narue-*kun*? I think you're in the wrong story buddy. (May wanna fix that)
MsPeanutButterCup
2009-02-04 . chapter 18
Oh My God!

Man, I wish I had a better vocabulary to tell you how awesome this story is! (Please instead note the over usage of explanation points as signs of my happiness over it)

Not only is your story entertaining (have spent most of my evening finishing all the chapters) but your female Naruto is believable. I've read many female naruto stories and yours is one of the few who were able to make the transformation from male to female work

So all in all.


BEST STORY EVER!

P.S. I hope it's going to be sasunaru. Along with many awkward moments between the two. : )
demon89
2009-01-25 . chapter 18
I wholeheartedly approve of a little LeexSakura. He's so sweet! Well, you'll still be doing SasuxNaru too, right? What about Shikamaru? Him and Temari make such a cute couple!XD
This is so cool! Three jinchuriki all in the same village?! What will happen next?! I really like the way your chapters begin and end, it makes it seem more like the anime, although the narrator voice makes me think of DBZ.Xp Can't wait for the next update!
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