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| St. Gauntlet 2007-06-17 ch 1, | abuseI'm sorry I took so long to respond. I've just been caught up in a lot of things lately, and haven't had enough time to sit down and read it. Anyways, I liked the story. It had a good message, and I liked the song lyrics you mixed into the story. I was hoping Reptile or someone would fly out of the chandelier and cause some mayhem, but alas, no acid spitballs at this ballroom. :) |
| Major Mike Powell III 2007-06-08 ch 1, | abuseDude, dude...just WHERE did the Edenians get those microphones?! Did they smuggle'em from Earthrealm? XD Now, nice work, soldier. Very sweet, quite...well, dare I say romantic, work? I DO like the Kitana/Jade friendship, but let's be honest here, son. Kitana and Jade look SO **' hot as a girl/girl pairing! (Drools) (Shakes head) Sorry, that usually happens. Now, if you want a little insight into the Jade/Kitana pairing, just click on my name and take a look at my only MK fic. You'll see what I'm talkin' about. Anyway, nice work, soldier. Semper-Fi! Carry on! |