excelent start. Please update:-)

EXCELLENT!

I look forward to reading more of this story line and it is posted.

Oh, you just cannot leave it there! But I do understand you have a lot of other stories going on. I would like to see more of this eventually, though.

I really like this story, and I hope more will eventually be written here. I stumbled upon you by reading amongst the favorites of someone who recently added me to their favorites. Cool how that happens. The only concrit I ahve for you is to replace all paragraph marks with double paragraph marks before you upload you fics-- the squnched together look is ** my eyes.

Thanks for sharing these. I'll be back to read more of your stuff later, I'm sure.

SS/HG is also one in my top three choices of a match for Mione. I just like her matched up with someone who can equal and challenge her intellectually and also be able to put the brakes on when her 'bossy' side gets out of control.

I expressed a wish for this sequel in my review of The Kiss. I will be waiting, probably somewhat impatiently (LOL), for more of it to be posted.

I sure hope that you consider updating/finishing this very promising story. Already I am hooked and want to know what happens. :)

This is going to be a great story. Like your other stories, it has a lot of unique elements that should keep things exciting. I might suggest reformating this to have clearer chapters and some white space so that it is easier to read. The eye strain might keep readers away.

More, more, please. This is a marvelous beginning for what looks to be a fascinating take on the "Empty or Hollow Man" theme. I'm eagerly looking forward to seeing what you do with it in upcoming chapters. I hope your schedule and muse will allow you to write and post more chapters sometime soon. Keep up the good work. Zafaran {mailto:} zafaran {at} fastmail {dot} fm

Interesting concept you've got here, I will be happy to see what you do with it.

Here's hoping that time, life, and your muse permit an update in the future. Thank you for sharing this story!

tHIS IS AN EXCELLENT STORY; I HOPE THAT YOU CAN CONTINUE IT. pLEASE ACEPT MY APOLOGES, MY COMPUTER IS ACTING UP.

Hi. I think this is fantastic. I was so sad after reading the kiss this gives me hope. Oh man I really need to get a life.

maria

If anyone can do it, Harry and Hermione can, I know it. Good job with this, I feel Hermione's desperation, and I'd love to see them do it.

Good so far.

I like this. I hadn't read The Kiss before, so I read it first. Very emotional and moving. I like the fleshing out of the story. I'm definitely interested to see where you take it. :)

That was a really powerful followup to your one shot. It has me captivated, for sure. I know that with the care and imagination you've shown in your other stories, this one will have amazing insight in how one would go about retrieving souls and I'm looking forward to seeing your take on it all. It left me nearly breathless, especially when I saw that it could be a followup to your First Prophey and Primoris Oraculum Duo stories. That's a real blow to the solar plexus! Keep up the good work, my friend.