Reviews for Young and Rich in New York

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meghan 2008-04-20 ch 13, anon.	abusegood story please do another chapter
mynameis............slim sh... 2008-01-25 ch 13, anon.	abuseperfect luv it u have got to put a chapter in where d and l make love . HE should become a cop in story luv it
Kaoli water goddess 2008-01-25 ch 13,	abuseInteresting... now it's life on the run! From a ** off ex who still is possessive... not good. Danny's gonna fight for her though!!
Bec0512 2008-01-25 ch 13,	abusewow, that was massive, can't wait for more. :)
xlilgalsophx 2008-01-24 ch 13,	abuseomg !! that was close =P Love it so much it has to be my fav. story ever ! kep it up chick x Love
annapixiebell 2008-01-21 ch 12,	abusefantastic story, i like where your going please write more
THE CSI'S JUNKIE 2008-01-20 ch 12,	abuseLove your story. I have been following this story but never took the time to register as a member. I thought it was time that I became a member so I could let you and everyone else who writes these wonderful stories that I read. I have become addicted to the site according to my husband. :-) So keep up the wonderful work and I will keep reading!
Bec0512 2008-01-19 ch 12,	abusewow he found her, You can't just leave it there its cruelty, please post more soon. :)
Phantom Flamer 2008-01-19 ch 1,	abuseI'm gonna be honest with you WTF?! Do you actually know any one of that age group? ANd if you do think really really hard about what they are like and if your story rings true. This isn't a CSI NY story. This is you, usng the names of the chars and that literally is all. There is nothing to say that it's CSI related, if you didn't know just to clarify, Stella is an orphan. She has no parents! The chars are nothing like the chars in the series, and as for the bondage bit at the beginning, how the hell did she untie herself? Is Linds freaking Houdini? It's like your trying to incorperate sex to make the story more interesting but it's out of place and you've turned the whole thing into some ill written teenage angst bullcrap. As for this being published, do you have an ounce of an idea of anything to do with the publishing world. Firstly it's illegal for you to use the franchise because that's what it is a franchise, and with a story like this there is not a chance in hell of them giving you the permission, or of anyone in the entire universe publishing it. You've made Linds a complete skank! (and I'm not a Linds fan, but I feel some compassion towards her char after reading this idioticy of a story) Danny a wuss, Stella a pampered rich wench, and Flack a woman beater. I am still reeling from the riduiculousness behind Marc's dad hating her and Marc even going after her. A bit of advice, you wanna write a CSI: NY story use the chars as they are don't make up chars and give them the name of chars from the show when they are so clearly not. Oh and think things through just a little bit, outline your plot in your head and have some form of idea to why your chars would do things on an actual realistic level.
Pedroia the Destroya 2008-01-19 ch 12,	abuseoH THE DRAMA
chili-peppers 2008-01-19 ch 12,	abuseCracking chapter!! He found her! uh oh! Wonder what he's gonna do now! Im really looking forward to the next chappy now!! Update soon :P Great job!
xxlil-mizz-hannahxx 2008-01-19 ch 12,	abusehi fab so far but plz continue great story line i'm not just being nice 4 more so the story i really DO like it
tori5553 2008-01-19 ch 12,	abuseHey great stoy so far please post soon!
Kaoli water goddess 2008-01-19 ch 12,	abuseSorry I didn't review... I feel really bad about not doing it now; I was just lazy, so sorry! Anyways, uh-oh... the boyfriend saw her and with Danny. This could turn out bad if she can't get him away. Those stupid exes just love to screw with our loveable couple! Great job; update soon!
Debavill 2008-01-19 ch 12,	abuseGlad you have updated this story... I had been wondering about it.. Really like it. Its different.. Hope Marc doesnt catch LInds..This story is different and addicting.. Cant wait for more.. Thanks

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