0.0 I think my mind went asplode. Such a good story! Update soon! Hurry!

Ghh...You can't just leave it like that! O_O You have to keep posting!

I really enjoyed it. You are a really good writer. Is it your future aspirations to become a writer? Because you'd get published for sure. Please write more!

I'm glad they're together. They're so cute. And I agree with whoever said about one with Doom being the dominant one. The bits with Jasmine were hilarious.

**Kami

Heheheh... Poor Jasmine. XD

"I'd always pick you." That was so, unbelievably cute! Probably my favourite line in the whole thing! I went 'aw' aloud! XD

Gorgeous! :D

WOW! awesome story!

and don't be discouraged by your lack of reviews, it's not because you're a bad writer, it's just because a lot of people don't read this category -cries- I myself only thought of it a few days ago...and I'v read Deltora since they first came out!

-is amazed at own stupidity-

but wow...ur Doom is really OOC...like, REALLY OOC

I'd love to read a fic where he's the dominant one XD -grins evily-

but yeah, I love this fic, so please do write more! much much more! XD

-iloveanimeguys XD

write woman! ! ! SUPER SPEED! ! !

YOU GOT ME ADDICTED! ! !

DOOMxBARDA yayz. 3

so you're gonna write another chapter? lol, and here i was afraid this was the whole "happily ever after" ending. lol, lookin forward to readin it :]

lol, idk, if u stil only have mis roxie as a reviewer, but u just got one more :] love ur fanfic, ur really good

I read your story. The 'don't molest my father in public' it surprised a laugh out of me. It's pretty good.

wow

This is an awesome story! I love this pairing, they really suit each other! -Mumbles about tall, dark, handsome, mysterious, angsty men...-

Loved the scenes in that recent chapter ;) Very nice imagery there. You write just how I remember :P Haven't changed a bit :P

- Patchy

One of the best from this writers collection, I'd be quick to recommend it. That said I've read most of her stuff so...

Keep up the good work Even I'm waiting on the next instalments.

Haha, this is quite funny and erotic. I love the whole idea of 'Let's disturb Jasmine' and it made me laugh. Too bad there isn't enough stories like this.

I agree what Mis_Roxie said, this does need a update!

ooh, I loved it! And disturbing Jasmine is definitely highly amusing! You have a very good writing style, too. I hope you keep writing for awhile!