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| Incandy 2008-03-01 ch 1,  | abuseShort and sweet. I like :) |
| Rinkashi Namiki 2008-02-29 ch 1, | abuseSuch a sweet and short fic. I enjoyed this. |
| Grapefruit.ninja 2008-01-22 ch 1, | abuseYay! This is so cute! I just barely finished reading the manga, it's so sweet, one of my favorites for sure! This is a really sweet fic, I think you're right, Kaguya is much more perceptive than anyone gives her credit for. |
| Link Fangirl01 2007-09-02 ch 1, | abusethat's so like Seeu if he actually spoke more. I think that's what he would say. XD |
| todayiamglad 2007-08-28 ch 1, | abusethat was soo totally cute! and although I read planet ladder a few years ago I totally see that happening and it gives me a bit of closer as to what happened when at the end of the manga you just see them with a child LO~VE it! |
| Trinity 2007-07-25 ch 1, anon. | abuseThat was THIS many kinds of awesome and perfect and cute and... I just don't have enough words. *swoons* |
| Yokai no Miko 2007-06-26 ch 1, | abuseAww! So cute! I love SeeuxKaguya and I really wish there were more Planet Ladder stories >. |
| megumisakura 2007-06-05 ch 1, | abusebeautiful! please write more planet ladder fics |
| Lunarmercury 2007-06-03 ch 1, | abuseAw. This is sweet. You shouldn't hate it. The present tense is.. interesting, and I think you might abuse punctuation a bit in the wrong ways, but... I'm sure a lot of it is stylistic. Change in the italics into third person is also odd, and it seems kind of like an author's note... I just feel the transition is jarring, but that might be because I'm not a fan of POV changes. Meh. I think it's funny how Seeu starts off horribly, but he fixes it somewhat. Nice job ^.~ |