Please don't kill ash, just torturing is fine and update asap

Ohh this is getting good. I want to know what is happening. Please update

All right, all right, here's your review.
How am I supposed to keep reading if there's nothing left to read. You stopped at chapter 4.

Yes This is getting good. I hope you update soon

Ok ok I'll review! Lets not do anything drastic now...

Another good chapter. Hope to see more from you.

Wow! New plottiness!!

The girl is... Jessie! Because she has an electrified net! XD No, no, I don't really think it is.

(I mean, unless I turn out to be right, though.)

So is it Duplica? Or some totally random person? And why am I even asking? I don't want to spoil it...

But yeah! Great chapter, and please don't kill Ash! At least, not until we get another character in here that I like. XP

I liked it. I find it beyond depressing, though, that both Gary and Brock are dead. They're my favorite characters on the show, because I think they have a lot more depth that the show just doesn't show. Ha ha! Show... show... lol.

It was very Dark Master-esque, but different enough to be original. But so short! When are you going to finish this thing, foo?

Good stuff you got here. I don't think I noticed any glaring mistakes, and your descriptions are spot on.

Of course, I'm a sucker for violent Pokemon stories, so my opinion might be a tad slanted...

Hey this was pretty good, I hope you do keep it up.

Good luck

Hahah don't feel bad but... I'm usually not one to read a pokemon story but well, it's one of your stories so I thought "it has to be good" and it is : )
Even though Pikachu and Brock are dead, oh well it still rocks!
I can't wait to read more of the depressing angsty story!

~Elli