Darn you, Lady Alinor. I thought we were friends (though I've most likely never met you) *sniffles*. I can't believe you'd do this to me. Write a story that takes so long to read that I have to go to bed before I can finish it... I know what you're thinking! I should have started reading it sooner! But I didn't! And now I have to leave wondering what will happen next...

It's a good story. The thing that bothered me the most so far is that when they first talked about Peter possibly being a Death Eater, Remus asked Mad-Eye if he had ever looked at Peter's RIGHT arm. I know, knit-picky. Other than that, it's great, and like I said, I'm disappointed I need sleep because I really want to keep reading. :)

One of the best

I just finished your entire story for the second time in a year. I must say that I loved it just as much the second time around (and I read the whole thing in like 2 days, thats got to be some kind of record right? figuratively speaking I just couldn't put it down!) I now plan on working my way through some of your other stories :) Don't even stop writing Lady Alinor, you have a gift!

I'd finally read your story after a year long delay since I wanted a hoped-for good story to read at a later date. Your story didn't disappoint me at all. It contained all of my favorites characters (even had some of them in prominent roles). It contained a healthy mixture of mystery, action, adventure, suspense, romance, and drama as well as a noble purpose to be true to one self.

Leila was a wonderful OC that I actually liked and enjoyed. Most OCs irritate me and made me want to skip their sections (stories too), so I was very pleased with Leila's character. Even better was that you didn't make her a red-head.

I was deeply saddened about some of the characters' deaths, but knew that it had to happen since it was a reminder that war isn't picky on who lived or died regardless of position.

Congrats on a job well done. Will read your AU of this story next and hope that it is just as good as this one.

I quite enjoyed this story. Leila's pretty awesome.

I love it and please update as soon as you can. ^_^

Holy. SMOKES. This is one of the best stories I've EVER READ on . Congratulations on KICKING **.

-Madeline

I LOVE THIS STORY
you're amazing.
and your writing style is so much like J.K. Rowling's. You really deserve a standing ovation for this story. Amazing job!

enjoying the story so far, but...Harry's Invisibility Cloak can't be summoned by spells. I get that you probably wrote this before that bit of info came out...but i thought i'd mention.

really enjoying the story so far, great read.

Loved the story, are you writing a sequel? Will it involve the Aperio world?

I hate my school. I will need to read this tomorow because i have class. I hate this. Where are my vocation? Gone! I want to read this!

I am loving this fanfic, and I mean it!

So I just finished this fanfic, and I'd like to tell you that I think you did a wonderful job writing it. The plot was extremely original and you had some really good ideas for the plot such as the Azkaban plan -- I definitely would not have seen that as the way they would have rescued Ginny. The story was intense and kept me on the edge of my seat the entire time, even though I did notice some small inconsistancies :P

But you did say there would be a sequel out, and I looked at your stories to see if there is, but I don't see one. Either that or I don't know which one is the sequel. Have you posted it?

I liked the over all story line and the way that it was clear that it was all temporary. The other thing was your ruthlessness. Good stories are ruined because the author doesn't seem to have the courage to kill off a character. It is a war, people will die and you got that point across beautifully.

I liked the Ginny/Theodore Nott, it tied up that loose end and I think they would work well together.

Harry seemed to be completely taken by this new world, apart from the odd moments he never really seemed too concerned with his other world and friends.

I liked it, good job. I noticed how long it took you to write it- you updated solidly so hats of to you for that.

Sarah.

I have just finished reading it. its an awsome story. I thought at one point neville might be the 3rd person

To improve:
We dont find out what happened in the end of the first timeline, you could do one chapter for the origional and one for the second.

I dunno if you tried english-ising it instead of americanising it, but it could have some work on it.

(like using term instead of semester or food shopping instead of grossery)