It's really good.
Never expected that to happen though. O-o
It's so twisted, and sad, and awesome!
I love it.

Poor Luxord and Marluxia, though.
But still... man you did a great job! :D

Has a nice twist to it, somwthing like American McGee's Alice.
And the idea of Marluxia's somebody being from Wonderland is also great!

...that was rather creepy... good... but...creepy...

DUDE! THAT'S FUCKING CREEPY!
Excuse my languages, but THAT WAS SO FUCKING FREAKY!

... man. This thing is so twisted, I love it. XD It's so out of the ordinary for this fandom, too. More props to you! :3

This makes me giggle giddily.

Lovely play on words and it was sritten in a whimsical way! :'D
really beautiful!
-fav'd-

I think you do the best of the Nobody background stories. But I'm a little drooling and fannish for you, I might be biased.