To bad you haven't updated this in awhile - its really good. Well, heres to hoping that you do get around to updating it. :)

Please update soon!

Interesting story so far. Can't wait until the next chapter.

This is getting better and better by the chapter...please update very soon!

great chapter. hope to read the next soon

great chapter please update soon

He had tried as hard as he could to concentrate, to make it so that his hand could become a part of the material world, but he couldn't, for the life of him, make himself concentrate with the sound of her crying so close to him.


That line was so sad, in the best, most fantastic, gorgeously cruel way. Really. In my opinion, this was the best chapter so far. I'm really looking forward to the next update, even more so than for Scorpion (gasp!). Anyway, the relationship between Horace and Molly is so genuine and bittersweet it breaks my heart. I can't wait to see them together!!

PLEASE UPDATE, I LOVE THIS!

Great Story...Update Soon Please

Sorry I didnt read it earlier this chapter was very interesting seeing as though Horace found Molly and see seemed scared of him. It should be fun to see where the nazi chick wants with Horace. Best chapter yet keep it up your faithful writer and reviewer
-PuppetofMisery
Ja ne

I must say you kept me waiting in suspence with his chapter which turned out to be just as perfect as the other it seemed to be a mix of humor and longing

Thankk you! Your the best for updating finally Horace understands and now the quest can begin. Keep doing what your doing my respcet for you has risen since I first saw your stories. Im begining to really get into the People of the Scorpion story its really interseting.

Yet another wonderful piece of work this chapter is my favorite yet. Its driving me crazy when Horace is going to realize Mollys feelings. I had a question with Molly have to die to be with Horace and is there going to be a Lemon about them.

Very well written. Im glad you finally decided to start on this story. Once again you manage to capture the human side of Horace instead of just a killer. I honestly think he deserves to be happy with Molly. Update soon! Ja ne:)