Interesting story line and fresh concept. Well and tenderly written.

Oh my, I am so loving this series, but then I generally do love your stories. Keep up the good work.

Wow. Okay, could you please change the rating on this one??! 'Cause that was way too hot for my teenage daughter or anyone else's to be reading...and I'd have to say there was definitely explicit material there! That being said, there was nothing gratuitous about this chapter--the whole series has been a masterpiece of characterization, including some incredibly subtle effects that you've shown the body change having on Rodney's personality--and some utterly convincing ways in which he hasn't changed a bit! Just stunning...and not helping my burgeoning McShep addiction one little bit! You and liketheKoschka have a lot to answer for... =P

This plot-line is a really great idea, and you're writing it exceptionally well.

Is this slash? I'm not a big fan of slash or male-female body switching stories but for some reason I seem to enjoy this series. I feel like I have been tricked somehow into liking this and I can only applaud your writing skills for tricking me. I'm not sure that made any sense so I'll just say it, I think this is a fantastic story and love how you have dealt with all the characters figuring out how they feel about female Rodney, including Rodney him/herself. This is a fascinating exploration of gender versus biological sex and how much one effects the other. I have taken way too much psych. Keep up the great writing and I'm really looking forward to the next story in the series, even if I was tricked into liking it!

Oh wow!! This was great! It was really, wow I almost don't know what to say. It honestly was great. There was no perfect sex scene this was a little bumbling with bashfulness thrown in. That makes it more real. While I really enjoy all MCShep (be it as guys or gender benders) I don't like when they are all hot for each other and are in bed in like 5 seconds and all the sex is perfect. First times (totally first times or just a first time with someone else) shouldn't necessarily be perfect. Seriously this really rocked. I am so glad you wrote this and shared it with us!

I adore this series. Its so realistic, and well written, and manages to capture the exact ways things could be, and all that other good stuff.

God, please keep writing.

Absolute love for this.