I should think the entire NYPD would be involved in looking for a fellow officer, don't you?

I'm finding many inconsistencies with this story, the major one jumping out that he was in a dumpster and brought over to the garbage dump. Now, if there were a strike on, how would this happen? Have you ever visited New York? It might do you some good to research your material before laying it out in a story, fiction or not.

This was a really good story - well sustained in terms of tension and pace right until the end as well as being a really good read!

Nicely done!

Talk about a perfect way to shut Tunney up! Great story all the way through.

I loved it! Great story as usual with a super ending. I'll be anxiously awaiting the next one :-)

Good cliff-hanger.

Now Ash, logic tells me that there must have been a moment between JD in his suit and JD in his hospital gown but it wasn't described - so near, yet so far! lol.

That aside, this story is so much fun!

Oh, Jim. No matter how much you change, you still stay the same.

Good job so far. Sorry I'm just now getting around to reviewing, but I've been reading all along. Looking forward to the next part.

OOPS! Talk about word association boo-boos! One Dumbo Dunbar foot into great big mouth! I love it.

Brilliant ! And getting better with every chapter...

I'm really enjoying this story and the fact that you keep me happy with a post every day puts a big smile on my face.

Thanks for writing!

I don't think it's physically possible for me to wait for the next chapter.

Just keep those good chapters coming. I may not review evey single chapter, but trust me, I WILL be reading them!

Great work-I'm crushed that I've reached the end of what you've written so far-what a big cliffy!

I appreciate the frequent updates. This is a good story.