So wonderful. you captured River amazingly well, everything was well thought out and fit together perfectly. Again great job.

that was really good wowow

I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?

aw i loved it

Still not sure what I think about Mal/River. I hate to admit it but I am a Rayne girl... Never thought I would say that. Even though I am not a fan of the pairing, I totally loved your story. Very nice work.