I love you.

Marry me.

This is how Death Note should have ended. It would have been so much better this way...

-WK

Just so you know, this is now my official canon. Raito-kun rules the world! You guys just don't know it yet ;)

It's always bothered me that Near won using a fake notebook that exactly resembled the first constructed in one night (specifically stated in the anime at least. I haven't got that far in the manga). I mean, seriously? Getting a handwriting expert to just write all the names perfectly would have taken days, especially given how detail-oriented Mikami is. And replicating the Note itself (aging paper, etc) would have taken further days, if not weeks to do exactly right. Sorry, but I don't buy it. I've probably missed something, but that's been my excuse for striking the last bit from my reality, lol.

Sorry for the rant, but it annoyed me that Raito's plans where bungled by something like that, since I was completely rooting for him. I mean, I was torn between L and Raito, but once L was dead? No competition. No way I was cheering for Near -whose only response Mello's execution of his fellow SPK members was an invitation to a race to find Kira first. Nice guy, huh? I can't imagine even L being that cold. Okay, maybe I can but at least he was cute :D I am so shallow . . .

Plus Raito was totally bishie, emotionally withdrawn and incredibly smart. What's not to like?

I know, I'm totally messed up. I fear for my future relationships.

What I meant to say was that this was a good fic. Well-written, with very few spelling errors and everyone staying perfectly in character. I loved it -great job!

This was pretty good.

OMFG! I LOVED IT! I WISH IT DID HAPPEN! and it fallowed raito/kira/light's character..shit..i cant spell thats not the point...its great..i loved it. onl if it happend..*sigh* then...Kira will rule! and that will be in my heart always -

Kira Fllower,

But Near Lover

Hard love huh?

Wow...if that happened...omg, everyone in the world would gradually die...:( Oh well, this is a pretty interesting story. :)

Ohh, I've never read the ending, so this is how it is? (But I know Raito dies and all)

I don't know if you were right in putting it under the 'parody' genre..the begining is sorta serious. But I liked the ending. Just wishing it happened.

Observe my skepticism. Kira-supporter? Or am I looking into this too deeply?