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Von 2008-06-24 ch 1,	abuse(Beams) ADORABLE! I agree. Sixth season had so much underlying potential. I in particular was disgusted by Phoebe's almost flippant attitude when she discovered that Chris was their son and that he needed her help to get them to concieve them. If they hadn't gotten together of their own free will, Phoebe would have just sat back and watched Chris die. :S By the same token, there seems to be a popular trend of Chris-abuse in fanfiction, where the whole family treats him like dirt until they realise he's family, where it's like a switch being flipped. I kinda don't agree with that at all.. it's like saying their behaviour was justified when it was just a desperate guy from the future trying to change things for the better (which they were mostly brushing him off, not really capable of concieving a future set in stone if they continued the way they were) but suddenly not for the same guy if he was their son. Woah, rant aside.. :D Awesome stuff. Very cool. :D The 'Goodbye' bit was classic Charmed, I could see it happening.
Ally 2008-06-22 ch 1, anon.	abuseThat was great, I loved it. I liked the way they did it the show, but i think yours is so much better. Chris is my favorite out of all the seasons, i they would have focused a little more on him in some of the episodes
Fantasygirl721 2008-06-06 ch 1,	abuseJeez, thanks, now I don't feel like a self-respecting Chris lover for never writing a Chris revelation fic. But at least I got to read a real good Chris fic. I do agree, they writers of Charmed did not use Chris to his full potential. In my humble opinion, Chris was the one character who kept the show from becoming completely cliche. He brought new depth to it when it had just about burned out. And then they killed him, not sent him back to the future, but killed him. How horrible is that! And then after Season Six, it just got silly. I hated Billie in what was it, Season 8? She annoyed me. But great ** job, again. ~Kat
move i gotta catch em all -... 2008-05-26 ch 1,	abuseit was cool. i was all no when he could avoid all the Q's even with the potion but not that one question damn that one question
Colormyworld 2008-04-13 ch 1,	abuseI really enjoyed your version and I think it has a nice ending. :3
ladylookslikeadude 2008-02-07 ch 1,	abuseIt's pretty good, as relevation fics go.
Sailor-Lit 2007-10-30 ch 1,	abuseLOVED it!
iamkagomeiloveinuyasha 2007-10-05 ch 1,	abuseoh,that that was so a tear jerker! claps so awesome
artsfan 2007-09-05 ch 1,	abuseI had tears in my eyes when I was reading this; awesome fic!!
cHoCoLaTe-cHiHuAhUa 2007-08-29 ch 1,	abuseAw... That was so sweet. And way better than what actually happened. And I just bought the 6th season too, and was shocked. I hate that Piper finds out, then they skip six months. Then Leo finds out, looks shocked, and nothing changes. I dunno why they did that. Chris was my favorite character, and wondering what Piper and Leo would do when they found out put my stomach in knots- but actually seeing what they did? No wonder I'm looking for alternate RevelationOfChris'sIdentity fics right now. Thank you for writing this story! It was so great! I loved your portrayal of Chris- and Leo and Pipers reaction. I just like to think that after this fic ended there was a big hug. Cause I'm a softie like that.
MidnightLightning36 2007-07-07 ch 1,	abuseWell written. Very well written. I love the "Nothing", the Charmed Ones' reactions are priceless. I agree about Chris' complex Leo feelings and I'm not disappointed, it was nice to read about that. I loved it.
lizardmomma 2007-06-06 ch 1,	abusei liked it
DejaVu86 2007-06-05 ch 1,	abuseThe end is just so sweet sigh Nicely done! Thx for that story
guardian music angel 2007-06-04 ch 1,	abusei agree with you on that one too. i know on the show it took alot for chris to forgive leo. but this was good! really good!
Jen 2007-06-04 ch 1, anon.	abuseThe typos and missed words were bad but the story was good. Better proofreading is needed. For example, this sentence doesn't make sense, "“Because it was time for your second son to be conceived, and there was no way you two were going to sleep together if I didn’t sleep together!” HUH?

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