Aww how cute. ^_^ I love NaruHina. The thing you could work on though is that when a new person is speaking it means a new paragraph. You can't have Naruto, Sasuke, and Sakura all say something in 1 paragraph. It should be more like this:

"ANN-OH MY GOSH!" Naruto yelled "I-I can't believe I forgot!" He turned around and looked at his friends. "I'm sorry guys.I've been really stressed lately."
"Too stressed for ramen?!" Sakura asked .
"Yes too stressed for ramen!"

Anyways, I liked it, nice work! :D And thanks for adding me to your favorite authors list and author alert list.

Cute!
At least its not the one about My Shino-kun and someone else
(No offending intended)^-^

BTW- I noticed that on your other story , My Red Thread, I didn't put my pen name, it is YukikoluvsShino4Eva! THERE!

lol...this has happned to me before XD

Ha! I bet Naru-kun wasn't expecting that. So cute and funny but pick-up lines are stupid but that's just me. Bai-Bai!

"Too stressed for Ramen?"
that sounds like a starting line on an infomercial. You know, those cheesy ones that star t at, like, one in the morning and last for around six hours that have the washed out camera tone and those creepy actors who can't stop smiling like they've had a lethal injection of botox?

Anyway, I liked this. Although Hinata seemed a little OOC. If Naruto will actually ask her out in the show, you can put money on the fact she will be KO'd.

Make that sequel, too. It's promising.
-taco

This...story...rocks! You should make a sequel!! And if you don't...I'll get the africans to revolt against the americans!!(I'm not african so stop thinking that!!)

I luve this fanfic! its cute!

That was sort of okay... probably doesn't need a sequel though

*laugh* That was so funny at the end and so sweet!