A great story. Very good.

You know, when I was watching the movie, there's a lot I never thought about. I only just got into the series about two weeks before World's End came out, but you made a heck of a point. She is King isn't she? And so what if he can't go on land, can't she visit him on boat? Maybe not for long, but Jack was on Davy Jones boat tons of times?? I don't know, maybe I don't know enough??

Sorry rambling, good one shot. It made me think. And did you see the ending? With Will and Elizabeth? Tell will he has plenty of reason to be happy.

WHY CAN'T WE BE TOGETHER?
lol... because...
i have tentacles.
and that could complicate things...
.jmfreedom.

Nice one. I love the interaction between Will and Bill. Thanks for sharing. ~_^

hm. you thought of the see each other at sea thing all by yourself did you, along w/ half the POTC enthusiasts? good yet sort of sad

This is a strange fic.
In a way, it's like... it's like Will from CotBP, the naive, eager, rash blacksmith got put into the role of Will in AWE, the pirate and Captain of the Flying Dutchman.
I think I might like it [=