not bad so far

"Hungry?"
She nodded, "Very."

Gosh I love your writing! Thanks for adding me by the way! I love this chapter please continue!
(High five for DA)
x

i am facinated...please continue...

Discontinued?!? No! I am very sad at that; you ended at a a very suspenseful moment! Why?

Wait a second... what was she eating? Was it meat? Shouldn't she be suspicious? Besides that one little detail that you left out, I rather like this story.

Please, continue.

AH! Its at a cliffy! well i hope you write a seccond part to this it is very interesting!!

I most say I don't much like this story, the reason is quite clear to me, though probably not many others.

I dislike it, simply because of language, just take the letter Hannibal wrote, there is nothing special about it, it sounds dull and very unlike Hannibal.

I would say that the story is in need of an overhaul, clean up the language, and work on getting it to sound much more like Hannibal and Clarice...

Good Chapter, well done!

Yay Yay Yay more more more please please please. lol! It is very interesting so far and I cant wait to see what awaits poor Clarice and the clever doctor in China!
Please update soon.

Ah this is very good. Update soon!

I am intrigued.

very interesting... I'm just going to accept that I'm going to be completely clueless until I see Hannibal for myself... sigh... well, off to bed then... *half-wave*

I. Will. Die.
If you do not update in the next... day. Really. Go you I liked this, and 'RUSH' is an interesting word I picked up here... good name for a Hannibal ff, dont you think?
;)
xx L~T

The writing was a little blah.

''She walked to the source of the voice and then found her boss staring up at her.''

Is her boss a midget or is Clarice the new jolly green giant?

There was a few other sentences in your story that are just like the example I gave you.

Also, Hannibal talks in riddles and you've failed to capture that. I can see you tried to make him sound intelligent or witty by using old cliché phrases like ''curiosity killed the cat''. Even though a fan of the books would know that Hannibal wouldn't say such a thing. He also wouldn't come straight out and tell Clarice he had a problem. He would lure her to him and manipulate her into solving it or drop clues to get her to figure it out for herself.

Clarice is also extremely out of character. She's a strong impendent woman. You made her look anything but.

Sorry if this isn't the kind of review you were hoping for. Just keep this in mind. Everyone has to start from the beginning. You learn through experiences. You will get better if you try hard. Put your mind into and don’t rush. Even this story can become a master piece. Just go over it and put some feeling into.

m... Now I feel woefully ignorant... how many sequels are there? and I thought those were books not movies, too... I recognize that sequels existed but this is the first fanfic I've read for one. It's like I've had the wool over my eyes. (har har har) Despite being a tad in the dark, this is a rather interesting concept, and I really like the chemistry between those two. I don't know if I would call it romantic chemistry based on just the movie, but they click together very nicely and you've captured it rather well. V for victory! w00t!