OMG! the first chapter is great! As soon as i started reading it... my jaw dropped.. poor Nami! chapter one is great.. now time to continue on reading XP

OMG that was so sweet =O

Well,I have to sy, even though the plot itself was a bit predictable, I did enjoy the read. Zoro had his moments of being in and out of character, but you made the romantic moments work, which is very important. Plus,your own spin on Nami's life made the tale very sweet,too.

Keepon writing! ^_^

--Ryoku's Jiki Sweetie

IT'S BEAUTIFUL! Sorry it took me so long to review, but I loved it so dang much! It's so cute!! Especially what she says about Yukio. It's got to be him that did it, I just know it! I'm sorry it's over!

Wha? The story's almost over?? Wah! I loved this story! It was soo good! Hehehe, I like how Nami shoved Yukio off the boat. That was good!!

Cute epilogue. You know, you shouldn't be so down on yourself and your writing in your author's notes; you're really good. Anyway, pep talk over. Bye!

Oh...It's over already? T__T I really loved this story of yours, even though it was so short! And the ending was so moving... Just awesome! I hope you'll write more ZoroxNami stories!

GO ZOROxNAMI!

Ow.. it's over? But it was so short!... Still, it was a really nice story. I hope you write another one soon... Of course a Nami/Zoro... really you were very good at the drama/fluff parts!!

NU-U-U-U-U-U-U-U-U-U! IT CAN'T BE OVER! NU-U-U-U!

*sniff* might as well *sniff* review *sniff*

all in all, this entire story was great! fluff everywhere! fluff is fluffy! the ending was sad though. it makes me like Yukio a little bit.

and also...are the two people at the end...ZORO AND NAMI?!

eh? EH? WHAT! IT'S ALREADY ALMOST OVER? BUT IT WAS SO SHORT!

I DEMAND THAT YOU MAKE IT LONGER! I DEMAND IT!

omg. i loved this story. you are an amazing writer! loved it! i'm sad that its over now.

iMiSsYsIlLiVaN!

Must've been a rough episode of DeathNote. Have enjoyed the story so far. Luffy had a pretty reasonable approach to Zoro being hurt, the guy is too stubborn to die at this point. Good work so far and hope you can update in the future.

i love this story. please update soon!

Hi there dear Kinkatia, i read your reply - thanks for it - as for the triangle suggested, i don't see it so much as a love triangle, but some Sanji POV, and Zoro's POV and reaction to the fact (and the blant and obvious manifestation) of affection from Sanji to Nami. Sort of as a fuel or motivation to make up his mind... or at least to make a move.. or claim...
But, any how... this are just raw ideas... i imagine it can't be easy to write a complete story... but you are doing great!!
I'll keep waiting for your next update.