You are amazing and I love this story.
Sorry it took me so long to review. I've been so busy. And it's so late right now, but I wanted to catch up on my reading.
I love you.
Awesome job!! KEEP WRITING!
I am loving it and it's going pretty well, so, keep it up, sweetheart!

great installment - does Stephanie know that Jon and Alan were the ones at the black city?

I really do like Stephenies character. More coming soon?
-MSB

oh interesting... some family history... I like it... update really really soon.. nice chapter
Caiti

Another brilliant chapter... Stephanie is soo funny... she deff. completes jonathan... she kind of reminds me alanna for some reason... anyway great job
Caiti

O. And the ice melts. I do like Myles' part in it. I love seing this plot progress (a.k.a, please update again soon).
Orohippus

Oh yay! Steph has some real sense. She likes him for his debating skills (and looks, obviously). Good reasons. You've made a smart girl here, Erin. I like her.
kara

This chapter is really good, and each chapter is drawing me in to the stpry more than the chapter before it. Update soon

O.o

great 3 chapters this is getting really interesting. i hope you update soon - i think i know what Gary is up too!

Wonderful darling... wonderful chapter.

Meg

He he! Jon got rejected! O, Steph is soo good. It's fun to have a laugh at a popular character's expence. Nice spouts of angry dialogue. It is also nice that Jon and Steph are being bothered about the same thing. :)
Orohippus

yay- go stephanie!

The 7th and 8th chapters were both really good. Is Stephanie and Jon going to end up together? Update soon

...eh. I love the story..just not the pair. ;)

Its wonderful tho... keep up the good work!

~Meg