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| Angelus1 2008-04-24 ch 1,  | abusethese are so cute. PLUS youre from chicago and you watch jag? major awesome points. (...we'll just ignore that part where you're a cubs fan.) |
| PrettyEyes72 2007-07-28 ch 1, | abuseCM, I can't believe I didn't review this when I read it back in June. :duh: You write the characters as though you know them personally. You have the banter down perfectly, and you saw into the characters' hearts. Sheldon and Flack emerging as the "Kings of Subtlety" was hilarious. Bravo! |
| Elainhe 2007-07-28 ch 1, | abuseI really enjoyed this. It is such a smart idea to build it around this specific card game, Danny calling Lindsay's bluff in the end! Your dialogue is beautiful, and I liked that you opened with Lindsay and Sheldon. Now, I will have to read some of your other work too. Any recommendations as to what I should start with? ;) |
| TBD 2007-06-10 ch 1, | abuseVery cute. I love your Lindsay/Danny banter. You write the characters really well. Great job :) |
| SavvyAngel 2007-06-03 ch 1, | abuseCute! :-D Personally, I enjoy how very subtle Hawkes and Flack are. Cause, as we all know, they totally would be ;) |
| chili-peppers 2007-06-03 ch 1, | abuseThat was brilliant! i loved it! So funny! i loved the banter between everyone , especially Danny and Lindsay :P great work! |
| ReJo 2007-06-03 ch 1, | abuseA couple of my favorite parts: "I’ve found that it’s not possible to care too much. That’s what makes us human. And it might cause you pain down the road, but not caring is not an option.” “Just promise me you’re not going to run away from me this time, Lindsay Monroe. I’ll follow you to Montana or hell and back if I have to, but I’d rather you just stay here, in my arms. The rest we can deal with later.” |
| bando2 2007-06-03 ch 1, | abuseThis was great as usual. I wish I had something more to say. |
| notesofwimsey 2007-06-03 ch 1, | abuseI love your "Let's Play A Game" series, and this fits right up there with the best of them. You have the banter and teasing and lightheartedness down so well with the whole group, and then turn on the tenderness at the last minute so well. Let's see - another game? Poll, perhaps? |