I really enjoyed it! I wish you had watched LOST, though. I think you would have really enjoyed how EVERYBODY got to beat on Ben toward the end of season 4...that was almost a parody by itself.

Oh my god that was fantastic! I love the show and have watched nearly every episode. Loved what u did with Kate and Jack. haha take that Kate.

Haha! Love it! You pretty much hit the nail on the head. Funny you've never watched it.

I also like your style. The dialogues are great, and I can totally see them in my head, which for me is an indicator of the quality of a story. Hehe :)

Just one small thing that tripped me a few times: you sometimes write about more than one person and still use the singular verbs.

Is there more? Maybe you should actually watch Lost and give it a go again.

Yes yes YES :D I couldn't wait for it to be here *lol* I read it on MRU, and I totally admire you, 'cause you didn't watch Lost and you wrote a GREAT parody, just like if you knew it well :D I know I wouldn't be able to do it with a show I don't know, and if I wrote anyway, it wouldn't be half as good!
And of course - Sana is love! *lol* :D