 lovely-star-209 2009-11-07 . chapter 1Very beautiful story! I enjoyed it immensely. :) |
 Aldrae 2009-10-30 . chapter 1This is just... Beautiful. I love the dynamic you portrayed between Jin and Fuu, but most of all I like how you kept the two of them in character. I like how you portrayed the struggle between Jin's inherent honor and his rapidly growing desire for Fuu. I like how brave she was about the whole thing. It is so much like her to be.You have managed to write a beautiful and tastefully erotic love story without compromising the characters or the anime itself. Very few writers are able to manage that. Thank you for this absolutely lovely work. |
 Tess 2009-10-03 . chapter 1 My god, it's so beautiful story. I am so impressed with your delicate description of Jin's emotion. God, it's a masterpiece. Incredible! |
 HatakeHinata 2009-09-03 . chapter 1LOVED IT!!
I do wish that Jin and Fuu had stayed together in the series. I loved them together and I always thought that Jin has a fondness for Fuu.
I love your fic. Beautifully written. The story was perfect! |
 Krissel Himura 2009-08-31 . chapter 1A bit cheesy and ooc... but in the end its good. hahaha! you delivered the emotions really nice.. I like that way of yours of writing! I hope you make more good jin/fuu fics! haha! goodluck!! |
 Kumomi 2009-08-23 . chapter 1CUte =] |
 respark 2009-08-17 . chapter 1My my, that was alot more than i expected for my first foray into this pairing, and in fact this anime. Believe it or not its sometimes the unspoken that gives a lemon all its citrus, so congrats on one of the best written stories I've ever read. The feel of it was so in keeping with the darker undertones of the series, and that ending! I would kill to have this kinda talent but alas I must leave it to the professionals such as youkaiyume and yourself. Keep up the good work! |
 Blood Moon Nights 2009-08-11 . chapter 1I absolutely adored this story. It was so elegantly written, and I enjoyed every minute. You're a fantastic writer. Thank you so much!! |
 Kate 2009-07-29 . chapter 1 I'm so happy to have read this.
I can't even explain to you.
Arigato.
<3 Kate
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 kissmyanimex2009 2009-07-26 . chapter 1Wow, beautifully done. I have no words at all, simply wonderful!
You kept Jin, Fuu, and Mugen all in character and managed to make the story sweet and sexy without crossing the line! (And not many authors on here can do that, mind you.)
Amazing job, I can't wait to read more from you! |
 Yazmin 2009-07-17 . chapter 1 GOD that was perfect this is my favorite story by far, much better then most I have read so far(and i have a LOT of free time) thank you so much you awsome awsome person. |
 kawaiiitahina123 2009-07-13 . chapter 1Great story. Love this pairing. |
 Ghetto Anime Princess 2009-07-06 . chapter 1OMG, that end part just made me burst into tears. I literally said aw and covered my mouth. "it looks much more beautiful in your hair" Love stories like this make me wonder whether or not there is such a desire, and if there is, why can't certain people have it? I loved it, doll. Keep up the good work.
Ghetto Anime Princess |
 Seonaid Mist 2009-06-27 . chapter 1How dare you.
How dare you make me cry.
I hate you. This story is too good. So good it made me cry and answer awkward questions from my family passing by me on the computer.
I'll never forgive you for this amazing fanfiction. I've never read anything so beautiful, heart-wrenching, and touching since forever. You are pure evil.
I'll forgive you if you give us more beautiful JinxFuu. |
 SilentUkeFuu 2009-06-14 . chapter 1 ~Was too lazy to log in~
This was beautiful! It made me cry, though.. :'D |