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ILuvFLUFFYmarshmellows
2008-07-23
ch 1, anon.
abusethis was oh so cute
i loved it
:D
im also a MAJOR fan of your artwork
especially "raindrops"
-ILuvFLUFFYmarshmellows
klv
2008-06-25
ch 1, anon.
abuseso dark it's intoxicating...
It makes my heart break...
I wouldn't want it any other way!
Thanks!
kit
2008-06-19
ch 1, anon.
abuseaww! This was cute :3 you should've seperated them into chapters thought cuz man was that long to read haha!! I hope theres a secale...
deity of death1
2008-06-16
ch 1,
abuseAhh... *raises hand* You caught me. I'm a lurker too. XD There you go, teasing us with a sequel when you really don't mean to write one.

It's... really incredible, this one-shot. I haven't watched Samurai Champloo in a long time now, and I haven't even seen the ending yet. D:< But this is a POWERFUL one-shot. And we get to see it from Jin's point of view, which is really refreshing.

Keep up the awesome work~. This was... a really beautiful piece to read. Thank you. ^_^
eriob34
2008-06-15
ch 1,
abuseD:

it was beautiful.

the complexity of Jin's character was simply beautiful. *dies*
Hannah
2008-05-21
ch 1, anon.
abuseThe only thing that I can think of right now is:
Wow.

I started reading this, and I couldn't stop. I was ** off when my dad told me to do the dishes. I about didnt get up I was so into this story. Poor Mugen, though. XD Getting shot down like that.

M... It's lovely. Honestly. I dont think I've ever actually sat through long enough to read something like this. Amazing.

10/10

♥Hannah Rose♥
Gota de Mar
2008-04-29
ch 1,
abuseThis is a beautiful story, even when it's a little risque. I like the fact that you chose to go for Jin's point of view, instead of the much favored femenine approach, which in this case it's obviously Fuu. We tend to forget that men can be passionate, too, because we are so used to woman being the romantic ones and this story was really enjoyable for that, the fact that it was from Jin's pov. I certainly wouldn't mind if you do come up with a sequel, that would prove interesting to read. But other than that, kudos for such a great story. And don't mind me if I put this one on my favorite's list.
Manthor
2008-04-21
ch 1,
abuseGood story.Refined and a sense of elegance about it.Your Inuyasha stories are good.This is a league above those.
Nevermore.Neverwhore.
2008-03-28
ch 1,
abuseThat was amazing. The LONGEST one shot I have ever read, but amazing non the less. I LOVE JINFUU it makes me insane that there are not enough of it out there. I could NEVER see her with Mugen when I was watching it. I always thought Jin was better. So, thank you for writing this. It was awesome, and I hope you find time to wrote more for this pairing.
Gina
2008-03-27
ch 1, anon.
abuseIt definitely made for an excellent read. Thank you for writing it! I really enjoyed it!
BlueberryDanish
2008-03-26
ch 1,
abuseSuch a lovely story. :]
autumngold
2008-03-25
ch 1, anon.
abuseThank you so much for writing another Jin/Fuu story!! I love it so much!! My favorite thing is how Jin slowly discovers that it is not Shino he wants but Fuu!! You write the best fanfiction!! I also really enjoy reading your Kagome/Sesshoumaru fanfiction!! Thank you for all of your incredible stories!!
hanichan32319
2008-03-20
ch 1,
abuseAwesome Jin POV. Love it. Bravo, bravo...

Quick question, though. The whole "I love you""No you don't but thanks for saying it"...You didn't happen to get that from Buffy 7.23 Chosen, didja? Just wonderin'...cause any Buffy fan is a good addition to the family
Sesshomaru's ladiey
2008-03-18
ch 1,
abuseThat was a beautiful story. I am still crying. You have a great talent. I just wish they could have stayed together in the end.
KnockKnock313
2008-03-17
ch 1,
abusethis story pulled at my heart. i remember samurai champloo and i remember wishing that jin and fuu would end up together. i absolutely loved this piece!!
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