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TomRiddleKicksAss
2008-01-14
ch 1, anon.
abuseThis was really good. i'll have to read "Riddles in teh Dark" they sound good, and if they're like this then I know they rock.
Jenny-Beth
2007-07-02
ch 1,
abuseThis story gives me that warm fuzzy feeling that I love so much. Oh, how I love fluff. I like that you had Tom use big words and talk very properly. That is how I think that he would talk, whether mine (in my story, I mean) does or not. You definitely surpassed me there!

Anyways, good work. While Tom's personality seemed a little OOC, we all take liberties to make our stories work. Yours would not have worked with Tom being His Precious Brattiness (don't get me wrong, I love him).

So congratulations on a story well written. You show some real promise so keep on writing!

Jenn
Kyra Renee
2007-06-03
ch 1,
abuseInteresting. I found this story -- cute, for lack of a better word. I liked the way it was written and so on and so forth. Very good job.
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