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| Lady-Bloodrose 2008-02-16 ch 2, | abuseGai and Lee That would be AWESOME and it would make sense because nothing short of a Mac truck could take them down and even then I'm not to sure that would do the trick |
| 10 tailed wolf 2008-01-30 ch 2, | abusedude such a good story i thought narutos father would be the 4th hokage |
| Akatsuki Leader13 2008-01-29 ch 2, | abuseinteresting. I think you should have Sakura gain the bloodline just because there few good fics out there were sakura gets a bloodline and possibly Sasuke. though please, please, don't make Sasuke an evil power-hungry psyhco. I hate when an author takes the easy path and makes him like that. Sasuke's a lot complex than that. |
| amethyst sylph 2008-01-26 ch 2, | abuseGreat chapter, it cracked me up. Looking forwards to more. |
| Orochigin 2007-12-16 ch 2, | abusevery funny. I love the girl attracting powers of the tail. cant wait for the next chapter |
| duelingchamp 2007-12-13 ch 1, | abusenice keep it up |
| Dark-Angel-Kyo 2007-12-11 ch 2, | abusei love it wen it's a cross over and there isent so many dbz and naruto cross over so what ever you do don't stop |
| Sharingan-hater86 2007-11-28 ch 2, | abusei like this crossover ja nee |
| Exiled Rain 2007-11-21 ch 2, | abuseInteresting. I look forward to reading more. It seems like this has a lot of uncharted potential. xP |
| Dragonmage182 2007-11-19 ch 2, | abuseSo is NAruto 1/16, 1/8, 1/4, 1/2 or full Saiyan? Loved it and can't wait for the following chapter. |
| So-kun 2007-11-19 ch 2, | abuse-falls over- @_@ Well, that's the first time I've ever read a DBZ/Naruto crossover. |
| Aki JS 2007-11-19 ch 2, | abuseROCK LEE! He would so be fit to be a saiyan. Great fic. though I don't get most of the DBZ stuff since I haven't really watched the series... |
| Key Shinigami 2007-11-18 ch 2, | abuseThis is awesome! My first Naruto/Dragonball crossover! Keep it coming! |
| S-Wanderer999 2007-11-18 ch 2, | abuseWell I'm enjoying your story so far. A question will Naruto and those who awaken their Saiyan heritage, have all the abilities of a Saiyan (and the benefit of a tail if they possess one). In other words, will they get stronger after being injured (the more severe the greater the increase), the ability to learn techniques quickly (both Goku and Vegeta demonstrated this, Goku with the Kamehameha and Vegeta with the Destructo Disc), transforming into a Super Saiyan (once they reach the base point needed), and if they have the tail to transform into a giant monkey/fox on a full moon or with Bardock's technique (and the increase of their power by 10x). As I voted I said Haku, but I think another that should have the Saiyan heritage should be Rock Lee. Also regular humans could use their energy as well, they just didn't progress as fast as Saiyans due to not having their abilities and from evolving on a 10g planet, so they had to do a lot of hard work (look at Yamcha, Krillen, Videl, and Master Roshi to name a few). Speaking of Master Roshi where is he hiding out (since he did drink that water that made him unable to die of old age) and will he be making an appearance (just think of his opinion concerning Icha Icha). Concerning Naruto, what types of techniques does he know besides Kaio-ken, that Goku taught him (just think if when they start to travel Naruto starts to fly off and waits for them to join him in the air). As for Kakashi what is he going to do concerning Naruto and Goku (since anything dealing with Naruto will have to involve Goku). Will Fat Buu make an appearance (think if Buu made someone's house into a gingerbread house and started to eat it). Also what will be the Sandaime's reaction upon hearing about Naruto and what happened to him. Also will there by any romance in your story and if yes who are the choices available and their gender in case you switch anybody's (I have certain people I like together and others I can't understand how they're together, so I'll find out in a review before PMing my choice if we can). Anyways keep up the good work and I hope to read more soon. |
| Bobboky 2007-11-18 ch 2, | abusesweet |