Ah, interesting concept. I liked how Zexion was the mysterious guy with a just as mysterious past. In AU, this suits him perfectly. And I just liked the whole enigmatic air this story had. Like Larxene finding herself attracted to him for instance. Very good. XD I thought it was pretty awesome, adn I love Larxion.

Zexicon is a bit creepy but I still like this story! It's cool D

hahaha!

this is just too hilarious.

c:

and i do adore the pairing larxeneXzexion.

8D

even though, it's kinda of a crack-pairing.

lol.

Wow. :O I loved this. Larxene was really in character, which makes me happy. 8DD And the beginning line really got me; it stuck in my head for a while.

Your writing style is awesome, I seriously wish I could write like this. xD

I am defiantly adding this to my favourites.

I liked that. I'm kinda mad that Zexion is a smoker and a bum, but that may just be my inner fangirl. Or outer fangirl. They tend to blend on certain subjects.

Woah. I loved that.

Really original.

Great job.

;]

Interesting side of Zexy, but drool worthy none the less I likey!

Larxene was so utterly perfect in this, I don't think any words could possibly describe the sheer joy I'm experiencing right now. She was amazing and the fact that you wrote my second favorite Larxene pairing makes me die a happy little death over and over again.

And Zexion, homigod. He managed to make breaking and entering sexy.

I love how she reacts to, beating him with her purse and swearing at him like a banshee. IC!Larxene makes me happy on the inside, and this made me do the hula multiple times. D

Love, love, love.

Ooh... *shiver* Zexion is so damn seductive...and yet extremely creepy. I would not want him to be there outside MY work asking for smokes when I leave. Granted, that would be very unlikely, as I work at a library.

NO! THAT MAKES IT MORE LIKELY! Because Zexy's weapon is a BOOK! :O

...I'm going to start carrying pepper spray around with me to ward him off. Or perhaps my squishy little Replica.

Zexion: Got any-AAHH! OMG TEH REPLICA, BACK FROM HIS GRAVE TO TORMENT MEE! *runs away*

Ahem. Anyways, good story! *faveses*

In reply to your review reply: xD I noticed your love for inserting Dark Tower references when I read one of the chapters of Spell Check, what, with Nozz-A-La soda and all. We're all guilty of it, ya know, putting in random pop-culture allusions in writing or speech.

Whoo! Well, I'm reviewing another of your stories, so you might be excited again! Maybe? xD

My review of this story: Now... Hmm... What can I say? Ya know, other than this is probably one of my favorite fics that I've read by you?

I guess it's just one of those stories that I like, a lot, and don't quite know why. It might be the style of it. I just like it a lot. Ahem. I've said that enough. :D

The depiction of both Larxene and Zexion was great. Larxene as that stand-offish, don't touch me you stupid prick type of character, and Zexion as a creepy, yet intelligent stalker guy (or creepy, little manwhore sex predator xD ). Yeah, good match.

I loved how one minute it was what was going on inside the character's head, and the next minute it was what was actually happening. O, and how one minute it seemed like Larxene actually liked Zexion in a twisted way, but also couldn't stand him. Jeez, I've read this three times alredy and I still love it. Kudos to you!

Jeez, and I half expected him to actually show up at the end. That would have been weird, though. Great story, loved it!

-Minnet