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| Mad-for-Jorja 2008-06-10 ch 3,  | abuseI LOVE this fic. One of my all time favorites. I love the way you write Sara. |
| Quill-32 2007-08-13 ch 3, | abuseTerrific! What a great idea, to have her rescue herself. Go Sara! And I love Bruno too, and Grissom being all caring. Fattening breakfast, heh. |
| Haldir's Heart and Soul 2007-06-13 ch 3, | abuseI love it when a man cries.It truly shows that he has emotions. |
| Joan Powers 2007-06-13 ch 3, | abuseNice, I like your version. Let's hope the actual season opener will be as good. Thank God for fanfiction! Joan |
| chrslauz 2007-06-13 ch 3, | abuseThis was so beautiful! I believe something like this could really happen- if the writers of the show don't screw it up too bad ;D I hope that when Sara makes it out of her predicament, she and Grissom are able to really connect like you portrayed. I'm not sure I think that's gonna actually happen, but I hope! Great job! |
| kaheels 2007-06-13 ch 3, | abuseAuntie Lib, that was just, so great. I loved Sara's thought processes. They were so enlightening and in character. If the way it actually plays out on CSI is half as wonderfully satisfying, I will be pleased as punch. Do you think you could finagle your way onto the writing staff and get this turned into canon? I'll give you a dollar. Seriously, though, keep writing. |
| lamcsi 2007-06-07 ch 3, | abuseWonderful story that shows how strong Sara really is. I liked the ending that had Grissom show his emotions. Your story was right on the money. |
| locardxchange 2007-06-06 ch 3, | abuseYou are good, very good. |
| fanofgrissom 2007-06-05 ch 3, | abuseVery nice!! I didn't see Sara as a damsel to be rescued either. Yeah girl power!! FoG |
| Andsowego 2007-06-05 ch 3, | abuseWhat a fabulous story! I really do LOVE that you gave Sara the power to save herself. I don't think the character would make a very good "damsel-in-distress", so I can't wait to see what actually happens in the fall. This is your first fic? WOW. You should definitely write more! Thanks for the great read :) Andsowego |
| Summer Reign 2007-06-04 ch 3, | abuseWonderful! I have been avoiding most post-finale fics because I haven't wanted to sink into a deep old depression--but yours was fabulous. A bit of humor to help Sara along and her fabulous spirit to help get her out of this mess (along with the lovely Deena and Onstar, of course). Great, great job. Thank you! |
| bbandgsr 2007-06-04 ch 3, | abuseooh this was really good! |
| contrarymotion 2007-06-04 ch 3, | abuse*thud* I think I'm in love, lol. That was a great first story (miles better than my first attempt.) Wow. I loved how you had Sara rescue herself, and the whole Onstar bit was funny. You don't happen to own a car with Onstar, do you? I definately look forward to future fics from you. Hmm...I wonder what happens at the Lab when she heals up?? *hint hint* :D |
| Mrs. Touchstone 2007-06-04 ch 3, | abuseAw, that makes me sad for Grissom. I sure hope this is something along the lines of what happens. I really liked it. |
| hannaberry 2007-06-04 ch 1, | abuseAwesome, I love it! You are my hero! |