Wonderful way to to wrap it up with them finally together in the bed. Snapshots that stay with me: Sara clutching her boots to her chest; Brass saying "She's going to want to thank you"; and the silent G/S embrace. Thank you!

I could really see Sara on auto pilot, hanging on to her mission, and you painted Deena (and the OnStar guy) nicely. I always like the lighter bits, like Sara's unspoken response to the "She's only semi-coherent" comment.

This is a fantastic fic. Who knows why I haven't left any comments before? In this first chapter I particularly enjoyed the dream sequence and Sara's determination: "She had worked too damn hard to get what she had to let some lunatic with bad hair and a bad attitude take it all away from her."

I LOVE this fic. One of my all time favorites. I love the way you write Sara.

Terrific! What a great idea, to have her rescue herself. Go Sara! And I love Bruno too, and Grissom being all caring. Fattening breakfast, heh.

I love it when a man cries.It truly shows that he has emotions.

Nice, I like your version. Let's hope the actual season opener will be as good. Thank God for fanfiction!

Joan

This was so beautiful! I believe something like this could really happen- if the writers of the show don't screw it up too bad ;D I hope that when Sara makes it out of her predicament, she and Grissom are able to really connect like you portrayed. I'm not sure I think that's gonna actually happen, but I hope!

Great job!

Auntie Lib, that was just, so great. I loved Sara's thought processes. They were so enlightening and in character. If the way it actually plays out on CSI is half as wonderfully satisfying, I will be pleased as punch. Do you think you could finagle your way onto the writing staff and get this turned into canon? I'll give you a dollar. Seriously, though, keep writing.

Wonderful story that shows how strong Sara really is. I liked the ending that had Grissom show his emotions. Your story was right on the money.

You are good, very good.

Very nice!! I didn't see Sara as a damsel to be rescued either. Yeah girl power!! FoG

What a fabulous story! I really do LOVE that you gave Sara the power to save herself. I don't think the character would make a very good "damsel-in-distress", so I can't wait to see what actually happens in the fall.

This is your first fic? WOW. You should definitely write more!

Thanks for the great read :)

Andsowego

Wonderful!
I have been avoiding most post-finale fics because I haven't wanted to sink into a deep old depression--but yours was fabulous.
A bit of humor to help Sara along and her fabulous spirit to help get her out of this mess (along with the lovely Deena and Onstar, of course).
Great, great job. Thank you!

ooh this was really good!