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Aw poor Erik...but I can't help but feel poor Christine too...it's a bad situation for everybody...

YAY! The very fact that the original Leroux tale was heavily influenced by Greek myth makes me love this idea even more! Great job paralleling the original god/goddess couple with Erik/Christine.

I look forward to more of your work :)

Muahahaha, so you've finally given into the evil that is ffn! I'm glad that you have. ;)

I love your stories, as you know, and this one is beautifully written. I had never heard of this myth before you wrote it, yet it really fits PotO so well. The imagery is wonderful and it flows smoothly. In only five paragraphs you really paint a vivid picture and draw the reader right into it! :D

I agree with Monj, write more!

Aw, poor Erik! I like the comparison with Hephastus! It's original and interesting. And I love the imagery you use! Write more Jenn!