*applauds* woo-hoo! I liked that one! I wasn't expecting Axel though...I was actually expecting Ansem again
very well written, very suspenseful :D:D:D:D induces hyperness because of remembered obsession for Riku--I really love that kid!

I should just stop favoriting your stories, because I love every single one. <3
You have nice poetic description woven through your stories, and very strong emotions for the characters, as well as keeping them close to their canon personalities.

Wow... I don't really know what to say. Nice.

AW! I am so in aw from the fluffiness. This is very well written.

Ha, something non-angsty for a change! Even though this one is a bit sad too, with Axel finally fading away. I like that guy.

Well, it's hard to say much about this. I liked it, yes, it was really well written, converting Riku's feelings to the reader. The dreams were good too, they almost felt like real dreams, but not quite - which is what they were.

It's really hard to say something when all you do is like the story! I liked the idea and the writing itself. It's a real good story.

...You write KH so wonderfully I just want to wrap it up and pocket this in my brain forever.

that was so amazing. it certainly was a well-spent moment of my life!

This was extermely well written! I love it!

Nice.
The wording, the imagery, the way you make it all flow into a movie picture.
"They're...greener."
I almost missed it.

As always, I adore your compositions. 10 stars. You get a month's worth of cookies.

HAV MAH BABIES PLZ.

You leave me speechless everytime I read something you write.

ZOMG! You made me cry! I usually don't read the Sora-Riku-Kairi friend fics, but I don't know. This one just caught my attention, and I read it and CRIED because it's absolutely gorgeous! The fight between Axel and Riku made me sad, because I like Axel and I wanted him to have a happy ending...oh well. It's still a beautiful piece. I love how when Riku revisits his memories and the descriptions are simply breathtaking. It reminds me of the KHII opening when they are all sitting on the paupu tree and Riku and Kairi start to fade away.

Fantastic job. *faves*

wow.
just...wow.
i swear to high heaven this was one of the most GORGEOUS things I have ever read. Just the way it was written it was so beautiful and inspiring, really it was. I'm not even lying, this was the most lovely piece of work to exist on this website.


“Why not? It doesn’t need to be different. It just needs to be nice.”

One of the best lines ever written.

This was SO pretty and moving, I'm blinking back tears, I really am. You've got major talent, girl. The way you worded this and how it all fell together, it takes real skill to do that. I'm a sap, so my tears may not mean much, but you can definitely go places.

love,
herzeleidx

I like this. Loved the characterization, especially of Axel. Great job, especially with the plot, which had a nice feel, despite the story being a one shot. All in all, 10/10!

Oh YAY! You finished it! ^_^ heh heh... I'm glad you finally managed to get this done.I remember seeing this on your bio A G E S ago. But then the night before you posted it, I was checking out your bio and I was like:

"Gaspeth! OMG! It has returned! She's gonna post! SHE'S GONNA POST!"

And then I had a little spaz moment~ ;P

This was really good and whoamigod. You weren't kidding when you said it was long. Yikes. But totally worth reading.

I liked the interaction between Axel and Riku. And personally I think Axel raised some very important questions. The line:

“Who said that you people have the right to exist over us? Huh?”

That was a wonderful line. The first time I saw KH2's cutscenes that's EXACTLY what I wondered. Because if you think about Sora and the others... They're literally saying that they have the RIGHT to LIVE and the Nobodies don't.

;_; -sadface-

But anyways, I'm really glad you touched on that subject. Sora and Kairi worrying and fretting over Riku was fun to read too. I like it when they're worried about him and his emoness. :D

Once again, excellent job!

*bliss*

That was cute. :)
I feel bad about Axel, though.