Interesting. Could be slightly more detailed, but it works for a oneshot. A very nice twist at the end, but once you got into it it was very obvious what the surprise was. Still, I enjoyed reading it.

7.5 out of 10

good story, I think you should continue this...

That was hilarious! :)

The super pope bazooka frog wpuld make an awesome movie\video game.

I woudln't expect Jeremie to be a good dancer in any way. Not saying that's bad, though. I think you kept everyone into character.

My favorite parts were the Robo Pope Frog thing in the beginning, the mention to the Robo Pope Frog thing, and randomly including the word Ham at the end.

Great story loved how Aelita was in Jeremie's room. I would of also liked to read about Yumi killing Odd so please sequal

Yay i loved it.

Especially when Jeremie was dancing. I imagine him as, like, suddenly breaking out into dance and not having a clue what he's doing. 0_o

And this is also a thanks for reviewing RTTP. *favs*

Funny.

This was a good laugh. I thoroughly enjoyed this chapter. Awesome writing!

I think that one good chapter deserves another.

Lol! That was good! And I loved it when Jeremie, ... 'suprised' Odd! And the slight touch of JxA was just what it needed! Good Job!