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Dark Twinkling Star
2008-02-25
ch 9,
abuseAwesome story!
SzmandaEads
2008-02-18
ch 8,
abuse“You used to impress me, Mindy. Now you just depress me.” - Brilliant line out of chapter 7! Seriously.

And even if you're not 'happy, I liked it, I seriously did.

“You’re right,” Grissom said. “Greg, I have a confession to make—”

“He’s gay,” Nick blurted out.

Haha, made me laugh while I've tried to keep looking serious. XD

And hmm, You did really well on Mindy. I wouldn't say she's the 'first'. I liked how she behaved, tho when she act 'worried', I started to get suspecious.

Good Lord, you're a brilliant writer! Just like they say about Jack Sparrow (adapted to fit you): "Do you think she plans it all out or just makes it up as she goes along?"
Lala the Overly Tired Monke...
2008-01-19
ch 2, anon.
abuseIt's only chapter two and Greg's been ditched in the desert, shot at and hit by a car...

It may be because it's 2:30am here, but I'm finding it hilarious...
Zaik of Wake
2008-01-19
ch 9,
abuseStory ROCKS!
Fish
2007-08-12
ch 9, anon.
abuseOmg the deleted scence part was hilarious, I couldn't stop laughing. I've never actually seen the rocky horror show but now I know I have to. Keep up the great stories.
MissCsi2008
2007-08-03
ch 1,
abuseThis Story is Just long enough it's awesome.
MissCsi2008
2007-08-03
ch 9,
abuseBravo Bravo. Take a Bow. This story was Friking sweet.

But I do Have one woard to say to you.

Encore. =D
Gwen
2007-07-02
ch 9, anon.
abuseOh my god... I laughed so hard... really like all of your stories, you're a really good writer. You capture the characters really well. Sorry I haven't reviewed until now, it wasnt working.
HauntedPast
2007-06-29
ch 9,
abuseBrilliant! Speechless!
Mandi96
2007-06-28
ch 9,
abuseVery funny deleted scene.

I kinda liked that they got away, even though Mindy did try to hurt Greg >:(

Can't wait to read what else you're going to write!
Tanguay18
2007-06-26
ch 8,
abuseWell, this has been a fascinating story. I can't believe Mindy has gotten away with it...for now (I did read the preview for King of Spades). I'm glad things have been cleared up because at first, it sure was confusing. Poor Greg, you just love to pick on him, don't you?!
MyRedeemerLives
2007-06-26
ch 9,
abusecan't wait for the sequel. =) the rocky horror show part made me confuse a bit. but luckily i understood some parts. tehee! =) and i loved mindy. i also see the romantic feel toward her and greg. =)
Kristafied
2007-06-25
ch 9,
abuseThe Rocky Horror hallucination scene is hilarious...
key-to-life
2007-06-25
ch 9,
abuselol god i loved this chapter. I love how Nick is winding him up about all the Rocky Horror things - best line - "Make another Rocky. Make you a man. Charles Atlas style." I love that line so much. Although i dont agree with Greg that Hot Potootie is the coolest song in Rocky Horror HELL NO but i guess Greg is ill so i'll just let that comment slide.
cause.A.scene
2007-06-25
ch 8,
abuseHey, I just wanted to comment on the deleted scenes...

I've never actually seen Rocky Horror, but my drama teacher was telling me about how when she was in the play herself, during one of the dance scenes, her bathing suit top came down and the posistion she was in didn't allow her to stop the dance and fix it so she was out there shining everyone for the whole song.

I don't know why I told you that exactly, I just thought it was a nice little coincidense.
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