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OneBadCat
2007-06-06 . chapter 1
Aww... so sad. And so perfect.

It's funny how the most unexpected people can help. It seems especially in Dark Angel fandom...

Thank you. Please write again.
Jayy
2007-06-05 . chapter 1
This is so wonderful I loved Alec, and his emotions. The last line is my favorite.
hanna
2007-06-04 . chapter 1
that was breathtakingly gorgeous.
Stand In Girl
2007-06-04 . chapter 1
... Aw.

Wow, I loved it. This route is a bit different than most death fics, which revolve around Alec dying and Max realizing her feelings too late. I liked reading the opposite, how Alec would react if Max were to die. The way this piece was written fit perfectly in with Alec's confusion and anger. It has a certain tone that I can't really describe, but it's definitely there. I'm not sure if that's just your style or if you wrote like that specifically for this story, but either way it's great.

I liked how he visited Rachel's grave to avoid Max's funeral. A strange, almost inexplicable act, but yet it makes sense at the same time. Once again, it fits his mood. And finally admitting that he wasn't alright was great, as was the way he kissed his fingers and pressed them to her headstone. Very poignant and sad.

Great job! Now I'm gonna have to check and see if you've written anymore Dark Angel.
Written666
2007-06-04 . chapter 1
aw *tear*. max can't die! make alec turn into dean winchester suddenly and make a deal with the yellow eyed demon to bring her back!! MAX CANT DIE! they have to be together...Do anything!! make her come back to life!! please...:( sniff sniff
it was so good! fav parts:

"Stupid.

Max Guevera, Beloved Idiot"

"Alec glanced around, making sure he was alone. He kissed his fingertips and let them rest against the grey stone, cool, in the sun. “Stupid,” he told it, told her. Then he sat back on a clock radio, and, just for a minute, there with Max, he was not alright,"
Sarah
2007-06-04 . chapter 1
Loved it!
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