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| CharmedMummy 2007-08-10 ch 3,  | abuseVery cute story. Also very well written which I appreciate, with attention to detail in both the plot and with things like spelling and grammar. Little things like that can go a long way to keeping a person locked into a story and not distracted. :) Again, bravo! Well done and I look forward to reading more of your work. :) |
| JennCorinthos 2007-07-20 ch 3, | abuseI loved this... You have to give it to the old ladies... They know what they are talking about... Loved this... JENNIFER |
| chili-peppers 2007-06-11 ch 3, | abuseAw! That was so sweet! I loved Edna lol she rocks lol. And i was laughing when Danny threw Lindsay over his shoulder lol I love this fic! Great Work! |
| CarolinaH.Manning 2007-06-11 ch 3, | abusewow, that was perfection pure. some people need a little push others a big kick :) |
| LocoGreggo 2007-06-10 ch 3, | abuseHehe. That was cute. Well done. |
| wjobsessed 2007-06-10 ch 3, | abuseWhat a cute conclusion to a great DL story! Very original and very fun! Bravo to you :) |
| LadeeBear 2007-06-10 ch 3, | abuseAw. This was so cute! I loved it. :) I liked Edna's character (quirky and eccentric. She kind of reminded me of Trelawney, if you read 'Harry Potter'), and the original aspect of the fortune-teller, fortune cookie, and Edna. It all fit well with the flow of the story, and of course, the DL love. Aha. Oh, and I HAD to laugh at the 'in bed' game -- my two friends play a similar game when they are bored in church and look at the songs in hymnals, except they use 'beneath the sheets'. LOL. xD Great job on this cute little story! |
| cjfun 2007-06-10 ch 3, anon. | abusecan't wait 2 c ur nxt posting. perfect story for some1 like me, tat believes in fate. truly believe tat every1 of us hv some1 tat is perfect for us...if destined, we'll meet up no matter how many barriers we hv 2 cvercome. |
| mabelreid 2007-06-10 ch 3, | abuseI love Edna what a great OC. Danny throwing Lindsay over his shoulder and taking her to the roof was kinda hot in a caveman sort of way :) Great little story that I will now add to my favorites |
| ReJo 2007-06-10 ch 3, | abuseI love it when Danny takes charge. |
| biancapj 2007-06-10 ch 3, | abuseThat was sweet. Loved all the love talk. LOL. |
| TBD 2007-06-09 ch 3, | abuseHey.. I'm a Leo... is that bad?? I loved this little fic. You did a great job at bringing in different ideas to both creep out and force Danny and Lindsay to confront their feelings. Great job and I can't wait to read your next one :) |
| LocoGreggo 2007-06-08 ch 2, | abuseLOL! Please continue. This is funny and cute. |
| A.Boleyn 2007-06-07 ch 2, | abuseAw, come on Danny, just admit it. :P I love how you have written them here - Lindsay hopeful and curious, Danny bashful and trying to ignore what he knows (deep down) is true. I enjoyed the touch of humor, especially the "in bed" fortune cookie game... now I'm totally going to try that next time I have Chinese! :D Very enjoyable read! ~Boleyn |
| PrettyEyes72 2007-06-06 ch 2, | abuse[quote]Throwing some bills on the table for the waitress’ tip he glanced at the discarded paper from his cookie. Before Lindsay could notice, he quickly snatched it up and placed it into his wallet.[/quote] See, Danny does believe! ;) |