This was a brilliant story.

Sorry it took so long to review, I've had internet troubles. Anyhoo, this was a great ending. Sad, but good. I can't believe Tonks died... I thought it was going to be the poison or something. Great story. And now I'm on to your new one. :)

I loved catching up on this and yes you did make me cry a wonderful story and I think you should write more about this little family and how he copes with being \dora's dad! Thank you anyway for a lovely story and for sharing it with us

This did make me cry. I didn't want Nymphadora to die, but I think it really worked out for the best of the story. Well done!

First, it's 'check', not 'cheque'.Second, it's 'paycheck', not 'paycheque'.Other than that, it's great!

Wonderful story!

YAY yes i couldnt wait for the end on so i came on here

that is really really really sweet!

the spelling and stuff is a bit crap though, so you could work on that...

really looking forward to the epilogue

oh my god! this was so beautiful chapter. I love it. I wish that i am Tops. then I can marry Sneep to. you're a great writher.

best wishes,
daphne
P.S I can't whrite english verry well because I am from Holland,so I'm sorry for my faults

Absolutely fabulous, just some really good story with a great happy ending, not trying to make things perfect or pressing characters into a new scheme. Just as good as dear Mrs. Rowling would have done it I guess and I am serious here. Believe me, I've read thousands of annoying Snape-Romances and this is the one, which I've always wanted to read but unforunately never found until now. Thank you for that.
One thing, after all that praise. You of all people should get a Beta. Even for me (Im German you know) the Grammar and word mistakes are awefully obvious!
But heres another thing. Normally those mistakes annoy me that much that I am no longer willing to read on, but your story was just to good to stop.

Did a good Job, really!

Greets,

LastUnicorn4life (Sleep)

Absolutely great so far. I never read a fanfiction where the characters were so not out of character! You managed very well to make obvious Tonks' state of mind and her wish to deny that things were terrible. Severus who his helping her, unnoticed and from behind. Its just great and quiet. No typical romantic bullocks. I just love it and hope to be able to read on soon!

Yours

LastUnicorn4life (Sleep)

yay! they are getting married! xD
can't wait to see what happens next... the bad thing with all these snape/tonks stories is that in many of them, they don't have a child... (hint hint ;])

oh well... keep it up!

100/10
(if it's even possible...)

=D Another great story :] This is so wonderful. You have such a flair for writing. Wow, this is amazing :] I'm very excited for the upcoming epilogue :] hopefuly soon, yes?

this is fabuless

its good

Your fic is really good! I so love it! I just can't wait to read the next chapter! Have fun writting it!