 Sapphire Soulske 2009-08-18 . chapter 5Oh wow! I LOVED this! It was so sad at the end, but the sequel story would be cute if they met up again in RikkaiDai on the Tennis Team. I really want to do that...do you have a sequel? I'd want to write something like that, or at least have something where it happens sorta like this and then they meet. Would it be alright with you if I did that? I'll give you credit and say that it was your story that inspired me.
-Saph |
 loove it!! 2008-08-28 . chapter 5 I don't know why, but the end got me to tears T_T h-he doesn't remember him?? hope there's a sequel... |
 Mrs Hatake Itachi 2008-03-25 . chapter 5Nice story! |
 poakkis 2008-02-15 . chapter 5Wah I'm crying! TT.TT That was so sad they had to part ways like that! It was such a good fic, now everyone knows how Yagyuu became the Trickster's friend ^.^
A sequel would be wonderful! |
 Flarire 2008-02-13 . chapter 5Amazig, its all I can say really, absolutly amazing. |
 ^-^ 2008-02-12 . chapter 5 I absolutely LOVED this story! I literally went "AW" out loud like every minute. It's very cute and very well written. Kudos! ^-^ |
 with love - fred 2008-02-12 . chapter 5That was honestly one of the best and most meaningful fanfictions I have ever read. You are an amazing writer and I absolutely adored this. I hope that, in time, you will make a sequel. I'm sure that if you do, it will still be as beautiful as this was. Keep up the good work and amazing writing. I look forward to any stories you write. Thank you for writing this one. :3 |
 Sweet Obsidian Rain 2008-02-12 . chapter 5Ouch. Cavity. xDxD This is so cute~ And sweet~ and just... lovely.
^^ Beautiful! I love reading about the childhood of the many characters in this fandom (if it is well written, anyway). The ending was a bittersweet kind of thing, but it leaves room for a sequel, which I hope you will do.
Hahaha. Niou's goodbye trick was simply love. xD
*_* Look forward to read more from you! ^^
-R |
 garo 2008-02-11 . chapter 5 I never really loved these two but your fic is so amazing I'm probably going to start liking them a lot from now on. It's very touching!^_^ |
 itssoMELISSA 2008-01-27 . chapter 4Aw love this story! |
 Ryuacchi 2007-12-16 . chapter 4 Yay~ You also insist that Yagyuu has a inner trickster in him!
Anyway, I LOVE your work. It's very interesting, and it's nice to see your descriptions of the Platinum Pair when they were young.
When will Jackal and Akaya appear? XD
And Yagyuu doesn't have to worry about glasses! He looks better with them!
Continue, okay? I'm curious what's going to happen next~ |
 IndigoChan 2007-09-14 . chapter 4Yagyuu and Niou are both so cute! X3 Please update soon~! :3 |
 HKF Girl as a Boy 2007-09-04 . chapter 4You can bet right now that I loved every second spent reading this chapter! Little kids are difficult to write, but you portray them, especially these two, incredibly well, to a point that I'm envious.
And I can totally hear the tone of Niou's voice when he answers, "A rock?" =D |
 Mrs Hatake Itachi 2007-08-27 . chapter 4Nice, do update soon! |
 Ai-Kusabana 2007-08-26 . chapter 4Hi there! This fic is awesome!
I love how Haru is here! XD He is just so cute with his devilish streak! I also love how Hiro's turning from a gentleman into a trickster! I'm actually hoping something good about Yukimura and Haru's friendship! It's kinda sweet they became friends so fast! *squeal* Kawaii!
Those two really look cute together! This might be weird for you but you see I kinda like Haru as uke and Hiro as seme. I know Haru's the prankster and Hiro's the gentleman and some say it's Haru who's suppose to be seme but well, the part about Haru proposing Hiro call him Masaharu-chan is kinda a hint already... Well, for me at least. It would be really nice if Haru's the uke and Hiro's the seme! XD Please! Please! Please!
CAN'T WAIT FOR THE NEXT CHAPPIE! PLEASE UPDATE SOON! PRETTY PLEASE WITH CHERRY ON TOP TOGETHER WITH CUTE PUPPY DOG EYES! XD |