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Taeniaea
2009-10-30 . chapter 4
cool story
litnite
2009-10-24 . chapter 4
i cant wait for the next chappie ah kimmie finally gets her revenge please please please please please update already so i would know whats gonna happen next the people are waiting for it the whole world is waiting for your update and the plot of the story is nice i love it so much
Turn.Me.On.
2009-10-20 . chapter 4
Awesome story so far! I can't wait to read the next chapter. I can't wait for Kim to finally meet up with Shego! Keep up the great work :)
Tiger Snaps
2009-10-08 . chapter 4
oh my god this story actually made me cry, poor Kim i could never go through that, through my entire existence from birth until these very words i have never read such an awesome story, its so well written, every novel, fanfic, magazine... ect this is the best i have ever come across you HAVE to update i MUST know what happens nect poor Kim and when is Shego going to find her?
tears of the soul
2009-10-06 . chapter 4
oh, cant wait for a vengeful kim. hope you update soon!
IkarusCazadores
2009-09-22 . chapter 4
I demand an update ASAP! Actually I'm not really in any position to demand anything but...still!
Kay8abc
2009-09-13 . chapter 4
I can't wait for Shego and Kim to meet up. I hate the fact every one's dead, but I understand that sometimes that has to happen. I can't wait to see where you take this.
-Kate
AthenaNoel
2009-09-12 . chapter 4
I love it! I hate that Kim's family has been killed but I really love this story. I am glad you updated and I do hope you will do so again.
ShadeZero
2009-09-11 . chapter 4
Man this is great keep going I can't wait to read the next chapter -plays the waiting game-
Mistique Four
2009-09-08 . chapter 4
I think that Nana should've put up more of a fight, just to get at those bastards.
Well, I hope that you won't have anymore problems with that awful writers block.
That Swedish guy
2009-09-08 . chapter 4
Just a few speculations, that might give the author a few plot bunnies. ;)

One has to wonder, how will Sensei, not to mention Yori take the news of Ron´s death? Both had a close connection to Ron and Rufus, and they are Ninjas. Ninjas have a nasty habbit of knowing things.. or finding out.

Monkey Fist. Might be dancing with joy. Or does he? Ron was _his_ enemy, and to be cheated out of not only his victory, but the price (Mystic Monkey Powers) as well... Monty might not be so happy after all. He might even want revenge, whether it be out of being cheated of what was his or out of respect for his nemesis.

Senor Senior Senior. Ah, he might be a villain, but the man has class. And going after the hero´s family is a big no no in the villain book of conduct. At least with the intent to kill.

Looking forward to more chapters, and perhaps seeing if some of my speculations gets answered. ;)
ruby-dwarfy
2009-09-07 . chapter 4
Oh. This story is really dark and fascinating. I can't wait until Shego finds out Kim isn't dead!!
ShadowCub
2009-09-07 . chapter 4
She didn't even try to fight, I find it
hard to believe that she would leave Kim alone especially with a big organization after her. They could have gone to ground.
Hard to believe Nana just sit down and dies.
ScOut4It
2009-09-06 . chapter 3
A very nice story, you are a great writer. I only wish that you would have kept writing more before calling it quits-ies. Thanks for the story and a great idea!
ShadowCub
2009-08-03 . chapter 3
I have a feeling that there is another Director around the corner in this story.
Can't wait to hear the truth.
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