I am really enjoying your story so far!! I like how different it is!! I'm interested to see what the Cullens will have to say about our favorite couple :)

...wow...
awesome story
and an awesome ending

omg...wow

its bella
yup
or a guard
or a wolf

awesome! go bella! woo ho!

omg...
awesome! woo ho! (ps im hyper)

boo ya! the family's here!
wo ho!

this was...oh wow. haaha :)
i love how you didn't say that she had 9 powers but instead two as in the other one is like capturing the others power since she can't have 9 powers, that isn't really possible by book...then again it wasn't "really possible" for her to be able to use her shield as human or produced a hlaf vampire half human child. aahhaa, ya know? ;D i loved it. kinda long, but whatevs! :D

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loved the story wish there was more maybe in the future but i understand cant wait for more if u do write more!

I love this story, and i ams oo upset that its about to end. Though i have to say im a bit dissapointed with the way you handled them having sex for the first time. Its not like i was expecting a full lemon but just something to signify its significance. i dunno...

I still think it would be soo cool if Bella were able to use others power without the constraint of physical contact, then she would be freaking invincible. And i also have to add that i love the confidence and vivacity you've given Bella as a character. It frustrates me when people over do Bella the shy girl thing.

oh wow. i really hope we get an explanation to how Aro knew they were escaping. obviously it wasnt marcus though if he were impressed with Edward. Anyways i love this story because i never know what to expect.

haha, i love the last line of this chapter. But i wonder if eventually bellas power will develop so that she will be able to use others powers without contact? cuz that would be so col!

omg i love this new bella, she's awesome. lol