OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG

Wow, this story is beautiful.

There are few things better than a little Neo/Trinity fluff :) I really really enjoyed this. I didn't expect to, to be honest, since so few writers can get Neo, but you sure as hell did. You wrote him like you've known him all your life.

Good work. Excellent work! Really loved it

The end of this chapter is beautiful

"to look up the names of every criminal listed in New York who's name began with M. The client wanted to find the guy who he said had killed his brother. I didn't believe him. I met the guy and he didn't have a brother. You could see it in his eyes. He just wanted to find someone. He was insane. I told him that and had been fired instantly."

This is genius. I'm taking a hint and assuming you're talking about someone looking for Morpheus. If that's what you intended, you did it flawlessly. I wonder how many people picked up on it. It's so smooth

wow- that was really really really good! i wish i culd write as well as that- it was really touvching. i mean touvhing. I mean touching.

c ya

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Bloody brilliant.

Seriously.

In charactor and just.. perfect.

Thing is, its kinda like mine, even though mine's a parody... so I'm kinda jealous cos yours is way better. Oh well. 11 out of 10.

Wow! Promise me you will do this for the matrix 2 and 3! I couldn't get enough! I loved all the little stuff you added in there! Great job, I mean that, I usally don't leave good reviews. Keep up the awesome work!

diddly day

Gak...*wipes tear away* I wish I could write like that...

I think you did a pretty good job interpreting what Neo would be like ig he were real. All in all the stories a very good read, very believable it feels like it was real and actually happened. You did a top notch job with this story. You're going to have to trust me when I say that's high praise. Keep'em comin.

Man, that was kind of sad! But it was good. Really good writing. Do another one.

I think you really got Neo's character. The things he was thinking, all seems to fit seamlessly into the story. Wonderful.

i reckon it's BRILLIANT! Not fluffy at all! except, uh, you could lose the "forever and ever" bit. (You should have put at the end of each famous quote i.e. there is no spoon)

Excellent story! It was just what I was in the mood for and made me picture the movie perfectly all over again. Good emotions, you made everything connect much better and I really enjoyed the scenes you added (with Apoc and especially with Neo and Trinity... but I'm a hopeless romantic so of course I loved Neo and Trinity!) I liked your background with Caitlin... often original characters like that can be annoying, but I really liked how Neo formed that philosophy on life, "Don't get close to anyone" - it explained a lot of his behavior in the movie very well. Neo's family story was very interesting, and I enjoyed the commentary on the movie without it being a complete reitteration - great job on the whole, and thanks for taking the time to write this story! Keep up the great work!

WOW. Just...WOW.