But all of your pairings except the preggers one have a strong essence of squick. Pass the brain bleach?

update pliz

Nice story!

omg plez do a chappy on the baby plez this story is go

did u post this story on fanlib? bcause thats were i foubd it (Compleated)
love the story
~Hime~

I love this story! Is that the end, or are you going to complete it a different way?

I have never read a story where Itachi wasn't killed by either Sasuke or Naruto...so that yours is different is a breathe of fresh air! I love a strong Hinata and an innocent Gaara too^^ Please Update Soon^^

great story lov it
plzs update soon

lol BUNNIES! lol you should have said they were bunnies, the definitely act like them lol.
Itachi is not the leader of the Akatsuki, Pein is.

in the story you said:“My name is Rock Lee and you have captured my beloved sensei and for that I can not forgive you.” You should have said: "My name is Rock, Rock Lee and you have captured my beloved sensei and for that i cannot love you" lol

“Tenten, come on, we don’t want to hang around here for long. God knows how much that cabbage-head will smell once he begins to decompose.”
lol who would? rotten veges stink, but then again he was already rotten

“Lee!!”

“Gai-sensei!!”

“Shut up!!”

I could see that happen,

XP you shall be the death of us, with too many lemons, we're going to have fish faces all day lol..
continue!

...Wow that is all i can really say at the moment...i think im in shock..the good kind lol i will review agin soon after the ...shock has worn off lol

this is an awesome story I can't wait to read more! Plz update soon!

PLeze kill the pink blob monster **?? pretty pwease?
I'll give you pocky~!

Oh yea... I want to ask, how many times do they have sex in a week? 10 times?? -drools-

I read the rest of the story on your homepage, and a few others too, you are AMAZING! Please continue writing!!

Yay! This story is awesome please update, Ican't wait to see how it continues.

I love this fanfic. A lunatic Sakuraß thats new, i'll read your other fics too, youre good!